Monday, December 4, 2023

Spotify 2023

We have arrived at that time of year when Spotify rounds up the statistics related to my music listening over the last year.

It turns out that I have listened to 4,039 songs this year for a total of 31,783 minutes.  That works out to about 87 minutes per day.

Peak listening was on August 26th with 776 minutes or almost 13 hours in one day.  I was in the top 11% of listeners.  I promise to do better next year, Spotify.

I listened to 1189 artists.  Finding a new artist and doing a deep dive into their catalog is a favorite activity.

The band I listened to the most was Styx at 995 minutes.  I was in the top 0.5% of all Styx fans.

My top five artists:

  1. Styx
  2. Rush 
  3. Queen 
  4. K/DA 
  5. Van Halen 

The five songs that I played the most were by K/DA.  I blame YouTube.  The song/video Pop Stars was recommended to me last spring.  It is a very catchy tune with an awesome video.  Whenever I need a little pick-me-up, I add a little K/DA to the music queue.

My top five songs:

  1. Pop Stars by K/DA
  2. More by K/DA
  3. The Baddest by K/DA
  4. Drum Go Dum by K/DA
  5. I'll Show You by K/DA

You can see the whole wrap-up on Spotify here

Diplomacy - December 7th

This isn't my story to tell, but it is a story that should not be lost to the mists of time.  Credit to The Diplomad/Lewis Amselem.

A Little Lighthearted Diplomatic Mayhem re Pearl Harbor

I served in Guatemala in the 1980s. While there, I attended countless diplomatic receptions and functions. Most have long slipped from my memory. One, however, I always remember when December 7 rolls around.

Among others in the U.S. Embassy, I got invited to an event at the Japanese Embassy in honor of the Emperor. You guessed it, the reception was on December 7. A couple of us joked about it, but, off we went. Japanese receptions were always among the best: superb food and drink; everything artfully and tastefully done; and their diplomats were nice, well informed, and seemed to like Americans. As the party was winding down, I slid over to one of my Japanese contacts and kidded him about the date, "You have guts throwing this event December 7."

He seemed perplexed, "We decided to hold it today instead of tomorrow, because of American sensitivities about that day."

Now I became the perplexed one, "What's so sensitive for us about December 8?"

My Japanese friend looked at me as though I were the biggest ignoramus on the planet, he whispered, "You know, Pearl Harbor attack day."

I couldn't help but laugh at this bit of international miscommunication. I told him, "On this side of the international date line, the attack took place on December 7."

He, however, did not laugh. Mortified, he turned bright red. I thought he would order the entire staff to commit seppuku on the lawn. He was so embarrassed, I got embarrassed. He could not stop apologizing for the error; I started apologizing for having brought up the matter. For weeks afterward, whenever he saw me, he would apologize; I would apologize, too.

A day after the reception, the Japanese Ambassador sent our Ambassador a bottle of very expensive sake with a long note. Our Ambassador, a wonderful, rough, tough oil man--and a Marine in the Pacific during WWII--called on me in a staff meeting, "What the hell is this about? Why is the Japanese Ambassador apologizing to me?"

I explained.

He smiled and said, "Ah! Well, then this is yours." He handed me the sake.

It is my privilege to be the host/MC for this year's Pearl Harbor Day observance being held at the USS Arizona Memorial of Michigan.  The ceremony begins at 1 PM.  Please attend if you can.

Review: MARVEL-VERSE: AMERICA CHAVEZ

MARVEL-VERSE: AMERICA CHAVEZMARVEL-VERSE: AMERICA CHAVEZ by Kieron Gillen
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3-star DNF review.

I don't recall why I picked up this book. Someone was mentioning America Chavez as an underutilized character. I thought I'd give it a shot.

I enjoyed the artwork. It was pretty standard Marvel art. I enjoy standard Marvel art.

The story was OK. Not great, but enough that I'd usually keep moving on.

America has two moms. Ok.

Then there are two male characters that seem into each other. Ok.

Then America goes into a house flying a rainbow flag - to have a make-out session with her girlfriend.

A couple of those elements and I'd have continued on. Everyone has to make room for everyone else. But the book was turning into an identitarian screed bent on excluding non-gay characters while hiding behind the tatters of a superhero story.

Moving onto something better as quickly as possible. Dorothy Parker can have her fun.

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Thursday, November 30, 2023

Review: Stand Alone: Wolfhounds - Book One

Stand Alone: Wolfhounds - Book OneStand Alone: Wolfhounds - Book One by John Van Stry
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

This is a 5-star review. My experience is closer to 4.5-stars, but this a great book. Go read it. Some modest spoilers are in my summary. Just go read the book.

Our protagonist, Chase, is not what he seems. Only he doesn't know it yet.

The society he inhabits is somewhat stratified. There are the common folks living common lives. It appears that moderate success is available to anyone who elects to put in the effort.

Then there are the "royalty". In reality, these are the genetically enhanced humans who can interface with artificial intelligence systems. Being genetically enhanced, the AI interfaced is passed down to their children. Humanity had previously experienced AI systems run amok. It took wars for humanity to reassert control over those computer systems. Now, AI systems require human input before they can carry out complex tasks. Those humans with the genetically engineered interface provide that input.

But wait! Not every interface is equal. Some interfaces provide better access and control of AI systems. The best interfaces are those possessed by the "imperial" family that are passed down to their children.

At some point, a commoner who lacks this interface gains enough governmental power to attempt to overthrow the entire system. He installs an authoritarian system to make things more "fair".

In the meantime, Chase just wanted to improve his position within the criminal world. Some judge tosses him into the Imperial Navy. Chase doesn't understand the judge's motivations. But he quickly adapts to the Navy and learns how to be useful.

His unit gets stuck in a sort of cryosleep. When they awaken, the unit discovers that they have been out of circulation for over a decade. The revolution has killed off the entire imperial family. Other "royals" are now forced to provide the control for the AI system; frequently at gunpoint. The new government is being about as effective as one might imagine.

And Chase might well be the most unlikely person in the universe with the possibility to influence the future.

A great story. Hard to put down. The author has put in a ton of work to make the plot logically consistent and interesting. There simply aren't any unexplained incidents.

I have two critical notes. The first is spelling and grammar. There were less than a dozen instances of poor spelling/grammar.

The second is the concept of "hot". As in "the smokin' hot babe sitting in my Camaro" type of hot. I've read several of this author's books. The women are always "hot". Brother, find a different way of describing women. This wouldn't have been an issue if I hadn't read those other books. But I did. And so it is an issue. Perhaps a minor issue, but an issue.

I will be nominating this book for the Best Novel category of the Hugo Awards of 2024. I think it is that good of a book despite my minor criticisms.

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Monday, November 13, 2023

Wha Choo Readin'?

A question/survey was running around on X the other day.  This one seemed a bit more interesting to me.  

Omitting collected works, who are the top 5 authors in your library by number of books on your shelves?

Stephen King ~15

E.E. Knight ~12

Christopher Nuttall 11

Dave Duncan 11

Miles Cameron 9

I included both physical and ebooks in my count.  Most of my Stephen King and E.E. Knight books were physical, so I don’t have an accurate count close to hand.

After considering it a little longer, I would probably have to include Piers Anthony on the list.  I owned a whole stack of his books before I figured out that some of his content was a little…erm…troubling.  And I wouldn’t want to drop Miles Cameron off of the list in favor of Piers.

If shared universes with multiple authors are included, then Dragonlance would easily make it into the top five.  Sorry, Miles.  That one would bump you off.

What are your top 5 authors of books you own?

The rest of the best is based almost exclusively on my ebook library and so it runs towards a younger author demographic.  I am loath to dig through my physical books to tally up those older authors, but I know there are a few that would be well deserving of inclusion here.

Margaret Weis and Tracy Hickman 10 - As a duo, which I took as violating the spirit of the question.

Nick Cole 8

Mark Lawrence 8

Emma Newman 6

Sebastien de Castell 6

Peter V. Brett 6

Martha Wells 6

SM Anderson 5

Frank Cho 5

Damien Black 4


Friday, November 3, 2023

Their Opinions Are Not Correct: Episode 133

They only vaguely seem to be opinions as there doesn't seem to be much in the way of fact going on.

Yes, I am listening to the "Our Opinions Are Correct" podcast by Charlie Jane Anders and Annalee Newitz.  Episode 133 features a discussion of Ayn Rand and her influence on Silicon Valley.  There are quite a few misrepresentations and misunderstandings in just the first 18 minutes.

One should be familiar with the relevant facts surrounding an issue before issuing opinions.  Their facts are sorely lacking.

As an initial observation, they routinely conflate Randian ideals with how Silicon Valley moguls behave.  No utopian vision is ever fully realized.  The personal flaws of Silicon Valley executives are not indictments of Ayn Rand's utopian ideals.  All utopian systems eventually fail to meet the challenges of reality.  

Early on, Ms. Anders suggests, and Ms. Newitz agrees, that Randian philosophy is centered on greed.  They assert that, under Randian economics/philosophy, people should take all that they can get.  That is a misrepresentation of Randian ideals.

The Randian ideal is that a person should be compensated based on the value that the deliver to the rest of society.  In a Randian world, the person who discovers a proven preventative for dementia (better still a cure) should receive a large amount of compensation because they will have provided a valuable benefit to everyone else.  By comparison, a person who flips burgers for a living should receive less compensation because the value they deliver is less.  For the record, I once flipped burgers for a living.  The Randian ideal is that the value of compensation should be driven by the just value the person has delivered.  That is not greed.  That is exchanging value for like value.

Later they refer to Rand's perception of governmental regulations are a funhouse mirror version of regulations.  They are implying that all government regulations are sensibly crafted and sensibly enforced.  That ends up being coupled with criticism of a "who is going to stop me" approach in favor of a "who gives me permission" perspective.

Ladies, welcome to America.  We are an exceptional nation.  The definition of "exceptional" being used here is [that we are] different from others; not better and not worse.  Where people of other nations must look to the government for guidance and permission before creating new and useful enterprises, Americans routinely express an absolute right to enter into such enterprises despite what the government (or other private competitors) may say about the matter.

We are glad you are here.  Please adjust your Overton window accordingly.

They discuss a plot point (I think in one of Rand's books) where the tax code is designed to keep the most successful companies constrained by limiting profitability.  Essentially, a successful company will pay more taxes so that less successful companies can compete.  They do acknowledge that "progressives" might want to nationalize some industries but suggest that no one is supporting a tax code with rates established based on how successful a company is.

Clearly, they do not understand how the US income tax code works.  It is a progressive code where the percentage of tax collected increases based on the amount of money that a person or a company makes.  There is a reason why so many companies and wealthy individuals spend so much effort to take advantage of the tax deductions to lower the amount of income that is considered taxable by the IRS.  Reducing the amount of taxable income not only lowers the amount of tax that is collected, it can shift the applicable tax bracket to one with a lower rate. 

If that isn't a good example of tax regulations limiting the income of successful companies so that less successful companies can "compete", then I don't know what is a good example.

There is a one-off comment about "crony capitalism".  Which, again, is a reference to the individual flaws of the barons of Silicon Valley rather than an integral component of the Randian utopia.  Most fans of Ms. Rand's books will point out that they include examples of crony capitalism being used to undermine individual freedom.

At one point, Ms. Newitz uses the phrase "individual authoritarianism".  The two halves of that term are mutually exclusive.  An authoritarian state immediately subsumes and supersedes the interests of the individual while a state that prioritizes the individual ultimately protects them from the authoritarian tendencies of the collective.  Ms. Newitz might well have uttered the phrases "dry water" or "military intelligence" or "healthy corpse".

They focused on William Hickman and his supposed influence on an unpublished story by Ayn Rand.  Hickman abducted, murdered, amputated, and disemboweled a young girl.  They suggested that Ms. Rand found Hickman to be worthy of admiration.  That is a misrepresentation of Ms. Rand's interest in Hickman.

I pause here to give our duo credit for knowing how Ayn Rand's work has influenced other creators through the years.  While they were obviously a bit more supportive of authors that wanted to engage in criticism of Rand's books, they were also aware of creators, such as the prog-rock band "Rush", that positively engaged with Randian ideas.

They noted that several Rush songs deal with dystopian worlds that illuminate Ayn Rand's perspectives.  One example given was the song "Red Barchetta" which tells the story of a young man who gets to drive his uncle's well-preserved car despite it being clearly against the law.

This song is immediately criticized as being in some way opposed to ecology.  That comment is reasonably related to another comment about Silicon Valley magnates retreating to their personal versions of Galt's Gulch as a dystopian world comes crashing down.

What I find curious is that they never seriously interrogate the context of Ms. Rand's philosophy.  They do note that she and her family suffered under communism and that Ms. Rand was able to escape to the west.  But they never explore why Ms. Rand was so passionate about her beliefs.

Socialism and communism have collectively been responsible for over 100,000,000 government-imposed deaths.  On a per capita basis, that far exceeds every other type of government available to modern humanity.  Ayn Rand personally tasted the fruits of socialism/communism.  Those experiences informed her passion for supporting the principle of valuing the individual and individual liberty above the interests of the collective.

Our hosts never seriously consider the idea that there is an alternate ideology being fostered in our culture.  They never engage with the question of which ideology, the Randian utopia or the collectivist utopia, provides the better prospect for improving the human condition.

In my experience, discussions of popular leftist talking points are rarely about specific issues.  Instead, they are part of a larger narrative that is opposed to individual autonomy.  Discussions about climate change are rarely about climate change alone.  Instead, they are about limiting the freedom of movement afforded an individual who owns their own car.  The objective of climate alarmists is to make car ownership unaffordable so that people will then either be coupled to a specific location or dependent upon government-managed mass transportation systems.

"Red Barchetta" is about a "better managed time" where the individual need not seek the permission and assistance of the government to move about the country.  Again, welcome to America, ladies.  Where no individual ever needs to ask permission from the state before exercising their rights.

Likewise, the fantasist visions of a Randian Galt's Gulch exist only within the context of a society that is embracing the predictably destructive ideals of socialism/communism.  No one needs to retreat to a fortress if a mob isn't using the permission structure of government action to seize the wealth, livelihoods, and lives of those who have earned their position in the world.

Later, they invited UCSD professor and philosopher Matt Zwolinski and author Matt Ruff to comment.  Professor Zwolinski does yeoman's work by correcting their misconceptions of Ayn Rand's philosophy.  It appears to me that the ladies did not expect to encounter someone who could accurately present and engage with Randian ideals.  Mr. Ruff is certainly a critic of Randian ideals, but he demonstrates an equal commitment to accurately present them before he engages in a critique.  Our hosts found both gentlemen's perspectives a bit baffling.  They did not seem to perceive any value in accurately representing Ms. Rand's perspective.

Outside of their commentary, I find their use of audio intros/outros/stingers unimpressive  Most of that music is pretty cool.  But the podcast is mixed so that they have hard starts and stops without any fading.  It is very disjointed.  Adding just a bit of fading so the music modestly overlaps the commentary would improve the listener experience.

While I did complete listening to this episode, I believe I will skip the next episode that I had previously added to the queue.  That episode is from 2021 and is regarding JK Rowling.  Given the duo's inability to accurately present Ayn Rand's philosophy, I have no doubt that they will be unable to do any better with Ms. Rowling.

An effective polemicist should be able to accurately present a position before engaging in criticism of that position.  As someone who wanders between conservative and libertarian perspectives, I am well acquainted with the arguments that are offered in favor of various leftist initiatives and can generally offer an accurate representation of leftist positions.  In my experience, leftists are rarely able to do likewise for conservative or libertarian perspectives.  

My experiences are bolstered by surveys suggesting that leftist ideas can be reasonably stated by people of almost every perspective while leftists are rarely able to return the favor.

I will be skipping this podcast for the foreseeable future.  Ms. Anders and Ms. Newitz cannot engage with difficult issues in good faith.  They can only engage when faced with a person-of-hay of their own fabrication.

Nothing to see here.  Move along.  Move along.

Monday, October 30, 2023

When Greta Meets Reality

 Courtesy of Mad Mike via Tom Kratman


Thursday, October 26, 2023

Poetic Timbre and Root

I was recently participating in a discussion about using poetry/songs as part of non-poetry-based stories.  One primary example was the many people who complain about the poems/songs that are part of The Lord Of The Rings by J.R.R. Tolkien. 

I generally do not enjoy seeing poems/songs in narrative fiction. That is mostly because the poems/songs are passive methods of integrating a backstory that could be accomplished more effectively via other means.

I'm not a big fan of poetry in general because poetry in an educational setting was presented as a decoding challenge where the reader is expected to have sufficient knowledge to understand obscure contextual references or "cute" phrasing. In my experience, the effort expended acquiring that knowledge rarely justified the experience of decoding the context or appreciating the "cute" phrasing. My Junior High humanities teacher always got the vapors over the poetry he used in class. I found those poems underwhelming.

As an example, I recall a poem that was ostensibly about the supposed beauty of lapis lazuli; a semi-precious stone.  There were several pages containing stanza after stanza about a hunk of rock.  Ostensibly, lapis lazuli was actually a subtext for something else.  All the clues were there if the reader had sufficient knowledge to decode plain text to reveal the subtext.

It may be that the type of poetry matters in establishing a connection with the reader.  I generally enjoy (and have collected) the poetry of e.e. cummings. I have a volume of Robert Frost's poetry at my bedside that I read and enjoy occasionally. And there are some epic poems (such as The Song of Roland) that I really got into.

Poetry is a form of expression with rules, traditions, and tropes that rarely connect with me. It is difficult for an author to make effective use of poetry/songs in actively moving the narrative of a larger non-poetic narrative forward.  I've read the songs in the Lord Of The Rings. Those songs are (for me) an extended aside that does little to move the story along; a respite from an active story that offers passive illumination of characters.

That has generally been my experience with most poetry/songs that are included in larger, non-poetic tales.

Saturday, September 9, 2023

Review: The Wrong Game

The Wrong Game (The Eden Chronicles #5)The Wrong Game by S.M. Anderson
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3-star review which is a reasonable estimate of my experience with this book.

The saga continues. People from our Earth have escaped to a parallel Earth called "Eden". They are fighting a war against another group of humans that came from a third parallel Earth. There is a fourth parallel Earth waiting in the wings.

Honestly, if you have read the first 4 books, then there won't be all that many surprises. The author is turning the crank on an established series. If you like the first 4 books, then this one will be fine. I'd have ordinarily given it 4-stars. But...

There are so many editing issues. Being an author whose work I have enjoyed, I forgave the errors for quite a while before making notes in my Kindle edition.
  • Chapter 22 - One of our heroes encounters an enlisted person who starts the scene as a Private, becomes a Corporal (magically), and ends up as a Private by the end.
  • The word "and" is repeated in Chapter 24
  • Chapter 28 - There is a "The" that should be "They".
  • Same chapter - It should read "of its" rather than "its"
  • Chapter 30 - The phrase "the this". Either one works, but using both of them is wrong.
Poor editing gets in the way of a decent tale.

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Review: The Darkness That Comes Before

The Darkness That Comes Before (The Prince of Nothing, #1)The Darkness That Comes Before by R. Scott Bakker
My rating: 1 of 5 stars

This is a 1-star review which is a reasonable estimate of my experience.

I didn't make it 10% through the book before Dorothy Parker's purported ghost launched it across the room. Within that span, we meet three different individuals. None of them are supplied with sufficient detail to establish a connection with the reader.

There are tons of references to other social/cultural elements of this world. There are several different "1000 shrines of..." or "1000 temples of..." references that feel a lot like Robert E. Howard's Conan stories. The difference is that the number of references to cultures existing outside of a Conan story are relatively few and eventually Conan takes center stage.

At 10% of the book, I was still trying to figure out which characters mattered and why. All of the references to mythic events, people, and other civilizational elements detracted from my engagement with the story.

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Friday, September 8, 2023

Review: Yumi and the Nightmare Painter

Yumi and the Nightmare PainterYumi and the Nightmare Painter by Brandon Sanderson
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

This is a 5-star review. He earned every drop of it.

Two star-crossed lovers. Separated by space? Time? Who knows. Yet joined by spirits in an attempt to free themselves. What has the spirits in chains? Read the story.

Yumi and Painter are in conflict with one another when they meet. He must abide by the social structures of her world. Structures that make no sense to him. She is terrified every time Painter violates her cultural protocols.

She then finds herself in his world where there aren't as many cultural protocols. And she slowly learns that Painter has made many mistakes in his life and hurt his friends. He does his best to hide the truth about himself for as long as possible.

Eventually, they discover the ability to see beyond the superficial and appreciate one another's perspective. Their strengths end up covering for each other's weaknesses in ways that ultimately make them better.

And there are spirits to be freed. So there is a mystery that needs to be unraveled. A mystery that impacts both of their worlds once it is fully revealed.

The narrative takes place in an obviously Japanese-inspired setting. Painter's world is akin to a neon-lit modern Japanese city while Yumi's world is more traditional and rural. The process of and inspiration for creating art is at the forefront of the tale.

Just go read the book. It is worth the time. There are moments of great humor as well as great sorrow. There is sympathy for those who are perceived as being least worthy of it. The ending is so well-earned.

This will be on my nomination list for the Hugo Awards in 2024

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Friday, September 1, 2023

Review: Bob the Wizard

Bob the WizardBob the Wizard by M.V. Prindle
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3-star review. My experience would be closer to 3.5 stars, but I cannot justify rounding it up to 4 stars.

The premise of the book is that our hero, Bob, watches some otherworldly figure murder his family. He is handed a magical device that will allow him to jump between astral planes/parallel-worlds/time/etc. He follows his family's murderer through space and time.

Bob eventually finds himself in a place where he discovers that he isn't the good guy anymore. He outright kills a couple of good guys. He didn't know, but the deaths are the result of Bob arrogantly thinking that all of his prior actions had been appropriate.

He soon discovers who the bad guys are and is enslaved by them. He eventually helps his fellow slaves escape and they all meet up with the good guys. He discovers that he is a descendant of a unique race. He learns to use some powers. His side eventually wins the day.

While I was fully engaged with the characters and the general narrative, there were just too many instances of poor writing for me to overlook. Also, this is obviously the first book in a series. I discount books in a series that are not self-contained story arcs.

In the early scenes, Bob finds himself up high on a building that has banister. Bob hangs from the banister rather than standing on a ledge that the banister would be protecting. I think the author wanted the cool image of Bob hanging off the side of a building. A little later on, Bob jumps from the building to follow his objective through a dimensional portal. He ends up landing on the grass without much fuss. All of that momentum from the fall apparently doesn't matter when passing through a portal that is hanging in midair.

At another point, Bob suggests that he is "wondering" the "Astraverse". I think he meant that he is "wandering". There is an instant where it is apparent that the author doesn't know how guns work. There is a reference to a deer having "fauns". The word is "fawns".

With a little copyediting, this would be a solid 4-star book.

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Thursday, August 31, 2023

Review: Cloud Castles by Dave Freer

Cloud-CastlesCloud-Castles by Dave Freer
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

This is a 4-star review which is a reasonable estimate of my experience.

Cloud Castles was written by Dave Freer and it won the Prometheus Best Novel Award for 2023 that is presented by the Libertarian Futurist Society. The award is named for the mythic hero, Prometheus, who stole fire from the gods and gave it to mortals. Prometheus represents human effort and in particular the quest for scientific knowledge even while risking overreach and unintended consequences. The Prometheus Award is presented for works that illustrate either the positive benefits of individual liberty or the negative consequences of a larger society imposing restrictions on the individual.

The book follows our protagonist, Augustus Thistlewood, as he embarks on a personal mission to help the less fortunate citizens of the planet Sybill III. Augustus, later just "Gus", is a scion of the Thistlewood family. While focusing on an engineering degree, Gus wandered into a sociology class and decided to add to his courseload by taking sociology courses. From there, he was inspired to "help" the less fortunate by "uplifting" them. Gus hails from the Azure civilization of humanity.

Sybill III is a gas giant with a dense solid core surrounded by a gaseous environment. There is an elevation range with the right gas mixture to support humanoid life. There are clouds that are thicker than Earth clouds. There are plants that have evolved to live on/in those clouds and end up creating a sort of spongy surface where people can walk. Other lifeforms have also evolved to live on the spongy plant/cloud structures. There are some interesting features to this biome.

The only "city" is called Big Syd. It exists on a massive antigrav plate. The descendants of a crashed prison ship now live on a few square miles of the plate. The only effective "government" are the many street gangs that run their various territories.

The population is dominated by the warring remnants of two alien races; the Thrymi and the Zell. The Thrymi are quite aggressive and will take humans as slaves to work on their cloud castles (roll credits!). The Zell generally leave the humans alone unless they encounter them out on the plant/cloud platforms. The Zell then capture the humans, sterilize them, and drop them back on Big Syd regardless of where the Zell first encountered those humans.

The one stabilizing force is that an Azure admiral arrived with his fleet in the wake of the deaths of Azure citizens visiting Sybill III. He threatened everyone with death if another Azure citizen ended up dead. This limits the ability of the Bid Syd denizens to respond to Gus' arrival.

Gus received field training from a charitable organization known as the "Blue Men". He is ideologically motivated to help out those whom he believes are beneath his status. Gus is also a bit clueless. Upon landing on Big Syd, he promptly has his bag and watch stolen by Briz. Gus thinks that Briz is leading him to the one good hotel on Big Syd and follows along.

A few narrow alleys later and Briz ends up saving Gus from a predator (human variety). Gus has no idea that he had been a victim of theft (courtesy of Briz) and narrowly avoided being murdered (also courtesy of Briz).

This sets the tone for much of the book. Gus wanders around trying to "uplift" the locals. He is delightfully unaware that each of his endeavors almost uniformly ends up crushing a criminal enterprise without meaningfully "uplifting" anyone. The sole exception is when he teaches mathematics to a bunch of trafficked underage girls. Gus thought he was visiting a normal school for girls and wanted to "uplift" them. He taught them the skills needed to know that the brothel owner had been shorting their pay and responded accordingly.

None of the locals in Big Syd are interested in being "uplifted".

Knowing about the admiral's threats, the street gangs (and others) are hard-pressed for an easy solution to Gus' interference with their various rackets. Eventually, they find a way to give him to the Thrymi. This ends poorly for the Thrymi. Gus and Briz eventually free themselves and discover that there are people living on the cloud/plant platforms.

This new population has fewer resources but has much better societal relationships. They farm what they call "the outback".

Gus discovers a different way of dealing with these farmers. They value hard work and Gus is willing to work hard. Eventually, he applies his engineering knowledge to build things that improve the lives of the farmers. In return, they improve his life as well. The free-will commercial exchange of goods fosters positive growth in the local culture.

The story ends well for almost everyone. The Thrymi, the Zell, and the various gangs are set for a bit of a rude awakening. Gus, his old family, and his new friends find they have many mutually beneficial opportunities.

And Briz...gets a piece of the action, but not the piece one would expect based on the beginning of the book.

There are several elements that work well. Gus is generally clueless which leads to some amusing circumstances. Gus learns that the best "uplifting" is when it is done with people instead of "for them" or "to them". Briz has several moments of self-discovery. The biology of the flora and fauna living on the clouds is logical as is the impact of coming from a home world with slightly higher gravity. There weren't any logical breaks in the worldbuilding to undermine the suspension of disbelief.

One element that is less effective is the general observation about sociologists and other "do-gooders" who seem to have no practical knowledge about how the world actually works. The plot elements of that assertion are a little too "on the nose". For example, I took the "Blue Men" to be an aspect of our modern United Nations.

Another questionable element is the binary contrast between the city and the country. All of the Big Syd denizens are morally compromised. All those living in the outback are hearty, honest, and hard-working. The manufacturing giant Thistlewood family is also presented as being almost uniformly good. A bit more nuance in this book and it would be a solid 5-star effort.

Cloud Castles is a solid choice that illuminates the objectives of the Prometheus Award and the Libertarian Futurist Society. It illustrates the benefits of people participating voluntarily in mutually satisfying relationships. To a lesser extent, it illustrates the harm of letting small powerful groups control society.

There is a strong Australian flavor to the language and perspectives used in this book. Language aside, there are references to old Australian outlaws. Also, the city's name "Big Syd" is an obvious reference to Sydney, Australia.

This is a fun if not terribly difficult book.

Dave Freer's acceptance speech for the Prometheus Awards is presented in Part 1 and Part 2.

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Tuesday, August 29, 2023

Review: On the Beach

On the BeachOn the Beach by Nevil Shute
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3-star review which is a reasonable estimate of my experience with this book. Spoilers follow. Read at your own risk.

On The Beach is a book about a group of largely Australian and American people in the months following a nuclear war that encompassed all of the northern hemisphere. The fallout from that war is slowly drifting ever southward killing everyone in its path. Due to the differences in weather patterns, it takes time for the fallout to reach the southernmost points of inhabited land masses.

The book was written in 1957 and was hailed at the time as a significant anti-nuclear war book. The story is reasonably well told within the context of the time in which it was written. The women are largely accessories for the men who are the focus of the narrative. The cities and villages all adhere to a stereotypical 1950s ethos of civility. [The book also unironically views government officials as capable and competent - think Raiders of the Lost Ark and the "top men" researching the Ark.]

The book is notable in that it never offers the characters a chance of hope of survival. In every instance where survival is discussed, it is dismissed out of hand with a note that everyone will die. The characters then go on with more mundane activities such as planning parties, planting gardens, and caring for children. The women are most likely to ask if there is a chance of survival with the men being more likely to offer a kind-hearted but stoic version of "nope, now let's think about something else".

The war was conducted using cobalt bombs launched between Russia and China. However, Russia has been giving away bombers to other nations and cobalt bombs are "cheap". Egypt used a Russian-supplied bomber to drop a cobalt bomb on Washington D.C. The Russian markings on the bomber cause the US military to believe that the Russians have attacked and counterattack. This draws the rest of the northern hemisphere into the war.

There are several issues that undermine the narrative. Some of those issues are best understood as resulting from having seventy additional years of science to help inform how nuclear weapons work.

- The book focuses on cheap cobalt bombs. There is no hard evidence of any nation developing such a bomb. It is theoretically discussed by anti-nuclear activists, but no military has ever developed, much less deployed, such a weapon.

- The book's presentation of nuclear fallout is not in keeping with any understanding of how it would happen in reality. Irradiated debris would certainly end up in the air, but it would come back down again quickly enough. The idea of a global cloud of radiation slowly settling over the earth is contrary to how such things work.

(For the record, nuclear fallout will kill millions and is very serious business. People can still survive if they live far enough from where the bomb explodes and if they take certain precautions.)

- The characters in the book take no precautions to help them survive. It is possible to decontaminate surface soil contaminated with cobalt-60. Mostly, that involves scraping off a thin layer of soil and storing it somewhere until the 5-6 year half-life has reduced any life-threatening potential. It isn't easy, but it is possible if precautions are taken.

- The author has given the characters uniform patterns of speech. Almost everyone sounds as if they stepped out of a 1950s vintage British movie where the characters are all erudite. It is only towards the end of the book that we encounter someone who is more workaday in their speech patterns.

-- The book involves Australian and US naval personnel. Both sides have remarkably similar speech patterns.

- "suicide pill kits" are distributed to pharmacies in sufficient potency and quantities to permit anyone who wishes to use them. Most people wait until the symptoms of radiation exposure become clear before doing so. This is all presented as an example of sound government planning.

- Everyone carries on as if nothing has happened. People still run their stores. Patrons still pay for goods. There is a concern for having gainful, if somewhat relaxed, employment. Coal mining continues so that the power plants can produce electricity. People plan for events in the years to come despite the narrative making it clear that people will not survive the coming radioactive fallout that will arrive in months. More human reactions would include a certain level of chaos.

-- As an example, some government minister has to be persuaded to allow the fishing season to start a few weeks early so that people can go fishing before the fallout arrives. People are otherwise prepared to abide by the prior restrictions on the fishing season. The minister passes this change as a "one-time only" circumstance after a bit of persuasion by other members of his social club.

The most realistic actions within the book are where people begin to cut loose from the formal social/military structures that otherwise defined their lives. In one case, a sailor leaves a submarine that is exploring the west coast of the United States. Being below water protects the submarine from radiation. The sub surfaces off the shore of the sailor's hometown. He swims ashore without permission to explore.

In the other case, a scientist came to own a Ferrari racing car in the days following the nuclear war. That sub-plot terminates with the last Australian Grand Prix. The drivers race with little concern for their personal safety as they would prefer to die doing something they enjoy than spending a week succumbing to radiation-induced illness. Much death and wreckage is the predictable result.

On The Beach is a satisfying read for those who want to experience an emotional case against nuclear weapons. It is an otherwise unproductive experience.

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Thursday, August 24, 2023

The Continuing Fukushima Scare Mongering

Gird your loins.  There will be another round of scaremongering associated with the shuttered Fukushima nuclear power plant.  For some, the concept of nuclear power is too scary to process.

The motivation for the coming round of alarmism is the pending release of water from the plant that contains tritium.  Tritium is a radioactive molecule that is rarely formed in nature.  It has a half-life of roughly 12 years.

The alarmists will point to 31,200 metric tonnes of water that will be dumped between now and next March.  That is a lot of water, the alarmists will say.  And it is.

But how much of that water is radioactive?  How much of actual tritium is in that large volume?

About 2.1 grams.  The radioactive potential of that amount is 760 TBq.

Again, they will point at that "T" and point out that it stands for "tera".  1 "tera" anything equals 1,000,000,000,000.  That is a big number!  Big numbers mean scary things will happen!

How about some context.

In 2018, the Bruce nuclear generation station located near Michigan's Great Lakes emitted 756 TBq of liquid tritium and 994 TBq of tritium contained in steam discharges.  Total 2018 tritium emissions were 1,750 TBq.

Also in 2018, the French La Hague reprocessing plant emitted 11,400 TBq of tritium combined with water/liquid emissions.  In 2020, South Korean nuclear power plants emitted 211 TBq of tritium in the water/liquid stream and another 154 TBq via steam.

All of those emissions continue on an annual basis without any documented negative environmental consequences.  Diluting tritium and then disposing of it in a larger body of water is an accepted method with no known/documented risks.

Nuclear power is the only safe, reliable, and proven method for generating electricity.  Don't let the scaremongers convince you otherwise.

Friday, August 18, 2023

Review: Beware the Dog

Beware the Dog (Junkyard Dogs #1)Beware the Dog by Dominique Mondesir
My rating: 1 of 5 stars

This is a 1.5-star review. I'm being charitable.

Our mild-mannered protagonist is tasked with delivering a memory stock. He boards a rocket ship. It gets raided by pirates. But they are the "nice" kind of pirates. He swallows the stick. Instead of gutting him, they take him along.

He later attempts to escape his captors while drinking with them at a dive bar. He ends up on the floor of a very poorly maintained restroom. His captors get into a gunfight. None of them die. They escape the bar and pile into a car.

In the post-adrenaline-high, our hero and one of his captors (the one girl in the crew who is also easy on the eyes) end up snuggling up together in the back of the car. While he is still soaked in the residuals from the floor of that very poorly maintained restroom.

Many miles and many chapters later, he finds her in his bed. Because...of course he does.

Wish fulfillment fantasy. Many spelling/grammar issues. Written to be made into a movie rather than read as a serious book. Several instances where characters repeat information that the reader already knows. Then there is a bag of clothes that mysteriously appears after our protagonist has been through various assaults, rapid escapes, and other events where picking up a bag is neither convenient to the plot nor actually mentioned in the text.

I made it 29% through the book before theoretically hurling it across the room in a manner purportedly reminiscent of Dorothy Parker.

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Friday, July 28, 2023

Hugo Nomination Pool for 2024

Works that made it onto my nomination ballot in February of 2024.  Updated as time, needs, and circumstances permit.

Novels

Novelette
  • Metamorphoses at the Gate by Lysander Arden appearing in Cirsova, Issue #16/Fall 2023 
  • Fossils of Truth and Grace by E.E. King appearing in Cirsova, Issue #16/Fall 2023

Graphic Novels

Dramatic Presentation - short form

  • Long, Long Time - Last of Us, Episode 3 - HBO - Honestly, I have zero interest in watching two "bears" bumping uglies.  But the writing and acting in this episode were so good that I watched the entire thing.  There are many excellent episodes in this series, but this episode shone far beyond the rest.

Dramatic Presentation - long form

  • Last of Us - HBO - I found the entire series to be great.  As the series is one long story arc, I believe it qualifies for the long-form category.
Fancast
  • Cinema Story Origins - Paul Hale.  Simply one of the best podcasts I've ever heard.  Paul's podcast began as Disney Story Origins where he compared the Disney animated films with the story (or stories) upon which the movies were based. He has since expanded beyond Disney works.  He is currently publishing a series on J.R.R. Tolkien's "The Hobbit".  Very entertaining stuff.  He includes several audio "stingers" along the way.  Episode 2 (CSO 11b) includes a "stinger" that applies on so many levels.
  • Casually Comics - Sasha Wood. I enjoy graphic novels/comics.  I do not make enough money nor have enough time to follow all of the properties that entertain me.  I am sad.  However, I really enjoy Sasha Wood's deep dives into various comics properties and issues surrounding comics and graphic novels.
Best Series
  • The Eden Chronicles by S.M. Anderson.  Book 5 (The Wrong Game) dropped this year.  Book 5 was a solid entry into the series, but it is not a stand-alone novel.  The series is great and well worth the effort to read.
  • Saga of the Forgotten Warrior by Larry Correia.  Yup.  It is that good.  Yup.  If you won't read it because of the Sad Puppy imbroglio, then you are denying yourself a top-tier reading experience.
I want to point out that I am way behind in several series that did have new installments this year.  I also want to point out that I am 100% opposed to nominating any series based novel in the "Best Novel" category unless a) it is the first in the series or b) all previous entries have been nominated and won in the "Best Novel" category.  The "Best Series" is where series-based genre fiction belongs.  And no where else.

Short Story
  • The Dusk Next Door by Mark Pelligrini appearing in Cirsova, Issue #16/Fall 2023
Best Editor, Short Form
  • P. Alexander - Cirsova
  • Beth Tabler - Grimdark Magazine

Monday, July 17, 2023

Vietnam Veterans Memorial of Michigan

I had an opportunity to visit the Vietnam Memorial of Michigan a week or so ago.  The memorial is in Mount Pleasant, MI.  Experiencing a memorial is always a moving experience.  So many good men and women have sacrificed so much for us without really knowing the reality of what they were purchasing for us with their lives.

One cannot visit a memorial without being humbled and experiencing the quiet hope that we are living up to the expectations of their sacrifice.

They have added a memorial to veterans of Iraq and Afghanistan at the Vietnam Memorial.  The two named veterans include one of my brothers from another drill instructor, LCpl Justin M. Ellsworth of Charlie Company, 7th ESB Combat Engineer, 2nd Reconnaissance Battalion.  The other veteran is SFC Gregory Rodriguez of the 709th Military Police Battalion, 18th MP Brigade.



The majority of the site is dedicated to veterans of the Vietnam War.  It is a beautiful and moving memorial.  All photos are of the "click to embiggen" variety.

















Review: This is How You Lose the Time War

This is How You Lose the Time WarThis is How You Lose the Time War by Amal El-Mohtar
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

This is a 2-star review which is an accurate representation of my experience with this work. I made it 60% through before giving it the purported Dorothy Parker treatment.

Heave, ho! - across the room.

There is nothing to spoil in this book. It is a romance novel wrapped in "science fictinite". "Science fictinite" is a bit like pyrite in that it looks like "science fictium" but is really closer to outright fantasy.

This novella won a Hugo award. Based on the context of other Hugo award-winning works, this one does not belong in that category.

It tells an intertwining story of two characters that putatively "work" for opposing sides. Each side has agents roaming up and down the threads of time weaving strands that work towards their favor.

And that is all you get about the mechanics and impact of time travel. Have a nice day.

The rest of the book is a series of letters. They begin with each side more or less taunting the other. The tone of the letters eventually mutates into affection and ultimately romance of a sort.

The letters imply extensive preparation. One is left in a weaving pattern created years earlier and handed down as craft to the person that unknowingly created the object read by the recipient. Another is a message hidden in some sort of lava (or other superheated material).

If you are looking for an unusual romance to read, then give this a try. If you are looking for some good science fiction, then pass this on by.

Much better time travel works include The Fires of Paratime by L.E. Modesitt Jr. (which ultimately became "The Time Lords") and Replay by Ken Grimwood. If you want some actual time travel, then please read those much better works.

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Monday, July 3, 2023

Movie Review: Indiana Jones and the Dial of Destiny

I took my beloved bride to see the latest Indiana Jones movie recently.  I've been reading and listening to reviews that have been mostly negative.  I stopped listening to reviews and projections several days ago and decided that I should see it for myself.

The best thing I can say about the experience is that we saw the trailer for The Creator.  It appears to be a sci-fi flick.  My beloved bride is (mostly) not a fan of sci-fi movies.  She saw the trailer and put it on our shared iPhone calendar.  The premise looks pretty good to both of us.

The Indiana Jones franchise has been pretty uneven thus far.  Raiders of the Lost Ark and The Last Crusade are masterpieces of American cinema.  They are individually nearly perfectly executed films.  Commentary from The Big Bang Theory notwithstanding.

I've never been a big fan of The Temple of Doom.  It isn't a bad movie.  It just doesn't attract me in the same way that the other two movies do.  It may be that we drop into an adventure without much framing and that there isn't a great motivation for Indy to get involved.  Also eating monkey brains (and other things) just isn’t in my wheelhouse.

Kingdom of the Crystal Skull was a bit of a hot mess.  The villain would have twirled her mustache every four seconds if she'd had a mustache.  The big stunt on the nuclear bomb test range strained the limits of the suspension of disbelief.  Many of the other stunts were equal tests of credulity.  There are other elements that are a bit of a mess, but it was largely a decent outing.

Call it (2) installments that get an A+ and (2) that are B- movies.  Now we have (3) movies in one category; B-.

Spoilers lie ahead.  If you like the Indiana Jones franchise and haven't seen the movie, I encourage you to go see the movie.  It is not bad.  It is just flawed.

Last chance.

Here we go.

Monday, May 22, 2023

Review: The Ferryman

The FerrymanThe Ferryman by Justin Cronin
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

This is a 4-star review which is an accurate reflection of my experience with this book.

It started out as a 5-star review that was closer to 4.5 stars but rounded up. This book is really well written!

But then I started thinking about the elements that made it a 4.5-star review and realized that 4 stars were more accurate.

It is impossible to review this book without spoiling it. The plot is multi-layered to the point where a discussion of one layer is insufficient and any links to another layer are too revealing.

So....go read the book. It is a great read that is well worth the price of admission despite my criticisms, below.

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Spoilers are ahead. And once spoiled, this book is ruined. You have been warned.

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Humanity has spoiled the Earth. A potential new home for humanity has been identified. An intrepid team has developed a propulsion system that will take a large human contingent to this planet. The trip will take hundreds of years. The same team has also developed a method for getting those humans to their new home - essentially putting them in a sort of state where they live in a shared dream and interact via some sort of computer network.

In the dream, a person "lives" for a long period of time before being reset. At reset, their dream memories are wiped and they return to society as an older teen with some basic understanding of language and manners but little comprehension of the world. They are adopted by an "older" couple, attend school, marry, have careers, and eventually succumb to time and board a ferry that will take them to be "reset".

This is the general framework of the world. The story involves one character attempting (and eventually succeeding) to break free from the dream.

We eventually learn that our main character led the team that developed this interstellar ship, selected the colonists, and developed the unique dream system that allowed the colonists to survive the trip. His wife was pivotal in the development of the dream system and acted as a dreaming controller that permitted the system to function.

As a side note, he and his wife lose a daughter to an awful tragedy before the starship leaves Earth. This fact and the many interpersonal relationships that unfold provide a thoroughly interesting exploration of the subconscious mind.

It turns out that upon arrival, the primary doctor is awakened to find that the destination planet is coming out of an ice age and is barely habitable. The doctor wakes one of the primary funders of the journey who decides that it is better (for this rich guy) if everyone just sleeps for an eternity so that he can continue his dream existence with lots of servants and power.

Why doesn't the doctor wake the person in charge of the expedition? This poor decision is vaguely explained. Oopsie.

So what are the elements that caused me to downgrade my review? Lots of little stuff.

The first one was the use of sex as a reset button. There is a computer/robot/AI (it isn't clear) that manages the transition from being old to being young again. In the book, this system presents as an attractive female doctor. There isn't any indication that the system presents as something different to different people.

When our hero is sent off to be reset, he encounters the good doctor. He is dressed in a robe. She has him get on an examination table for what is ostensibly going to be a medical exam. She then strips and hops onboard for a little cowgirl action. It is the sort of weird thing that happens in dreams.

How do the women "reset"? Is it the same doctor/system? The book doesn't present other genders as an option for the system. Men and women generally approach sex differently. I find it hard to believe that the women in the dream system would readily respond to "surprise sex" with a doctor in a medical setting.

The second element is a "blame it all on the rich" mentality. There are obligatory genuflections towards wealth inequality, blaming the rich for despoiling the planet, overconsumption, barely veiled blaming of capitalism, blah, blah, blah. The typical leftist hymnal.

People want to own homes. They want more leisure time created by using modern conveniences. If we could somehow miracle "the rich" into the middle class, we would not eliminate the market demand for new/better goods. It is that market activity that creates the wealth needed for average people...not "the rich"...to improve the quality of their lives.

If...and that word is doing a lot of heavy lifting...humanity is despoiling the Earth, then it is the average human that is responsible. Not the Eeville "rich".

There is no option that creates sufficient economic growth to lift the vast majority of humanity out of poverty without also creating opportunities for income inequality. Make no mistake. Socialism/communism create poverty. Capitalism creates wealth that lifts people out of poverty. Nor was there ever an option to get to where we are today without using fossil fuels at some point.

Regarding the "If" mentioned above, in the book, there are a series of ecological calamities going on. One, in particular, involves a wildfire sweeping from the Mississippi River to the Pacific Ocean. That sort of climate alarmism simply isn't justified by any rational reading of climate science.

A third element is "the dream" in which they all live. The waking colonists quickly become pissed as they figure out that our main character devised a computer simulation where they ended up being the slaves (or near slaves) to the wealthy people that funded the development of the colony program and ship. Our main character expresses the thought that he made them dream slaves for their own good. That the experience of being dream slaves would provide a useful motivation once they landed on the new planet.

Within the story, the colonists all suddenly realize that it was only a dream and it didn't matter.

Our main character sends them down to the new planet without most of the rich people. The "useful" rich people get to stay. Our main character then redesigns the dream simulation to effectively teach those rich people a lesson and they begin the long flight back to a (hopefully recovered) Earth.

So the dream didn't matter except when it did. They were screening colonists for the right skills and attitudes. He had the ability to design the dream simulation to "teach lessons" at the start. And at no point was there any consideration for screening out rich people that were abusive, or using the power to use the dream simulation to "teach lessons" on the way to the new planet. It was always in the main character's plan to not let the rich join the rest of the colonists on the new planet.

Essentially, there is one person with the power to make life-and-death decisions for thousands of human survivors. Those kinds of systems rarely end well. But in this case, an all wise and all powerful Gary Stu rides to the rescue.

At this point, it seems a minor nitpick to point out that the author stereotypes "rich people" in a way that would never be tolerated by any other group.

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I can survive any story that uses a couple of disagreeable tropes. But throwing in the entire kitchen complete with the kitchen sink is a bit much.

This is the sort of book that the New York publishing world adores. I found it quite entertaining and well worth the effort despite my complaints.

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Tuesday, May 9, 2023

Review: The King of Elfland's Daughter

The King of Elfland's DaughterThe King of Elfland's Daughter by Lord Dunsany
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

This is a 4-star review. I think that is a good estimate of my experience with this book.

This book is one of the early examples of fantasy writing. It tells the story of a village that thinks it will be better off if they experience magic. The villagers hold a parliament to identify this desire. The leaders express this desire to their king who promptly takes steps to bring magic to the village.

He sends his son to Elfland; a magical land that borders the human lands. The son makes the trip, "rescues" the titular King of Elfland's Daughter, and brings her back. She never really fits in with the humans of the village but stays long enough to give birth to a son.

The daughter is eventually called home to Elfland. She leaves her husband and their son. When her husband goes in search of Elfland, he can no longer find it as the King of Elfland has magically withdrawn his kingdom from contact with humans.

The search for Elfland and the titular daughter eventually brings more magic to the village. All of a sudden, the humans don't fit in with their village which is being overrun by magic. Then eventually hold another parliament to determine that maybe they need to get rid of the magic.

I'm reminded of Veruca Salt in Charlie and the Chocolate Factory deciding that she does not want a boat like that one after all.

The book offers several different views of characters wanting something very badly and then discovering that they have to make sacrifices to fulfill that desire. Sometimes the sacrifices are worthwhile. Sometimes they aren't.

This is a very quiet story. There aren't any earth-shattering/world-ending consequences. But the people of the village and the inhabitants of Elfland all have to learn a bit about life outside of their narrow experience.

Being written in 1924, the language is not exactly what a modern reader will immediately enjoy. It takes some time to become accustomed to the era of English language being used.

Language aside, this is an enjoyable tale that is worth the reader's time.

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Review: The Dabare Snake Launcher

The Dabare Snake LauncherThe Dabare Snake Launcher by Joelle Presby
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3-star review. A better estimate of my experience is 3.5 stars. I just couldn't talk myself into rounding up to 4 stars.

The premise of this book is that a large company has developed the holy grail of a substance strong enough for use as the cable for a space elevator. They begin building that elevator. There is a great deal of corporate intrigue surrounding that project. The reader never experiences the process of developing that cable material.

A side problem is that they need an effective means for getting the construction materials from the Earth to outer space. Toward that end, they decide to build a rocket sled that will hurl rockets into the upper atmosphere where the rocket engines take over the task of boosting the payloads into orbit. The forces are too great to permit fragile payloads such as humans.

[a brief aside - there are a couple of interesting concepts for accomplishing that task that do not appear in the book. One is to build a long, sealed tube. The lower end of the tube would be far below the surface of the ocean. A closely fit baffle is lowered to the bottom of the tube. The payload is then lowered until it rests on the baffle. Valves are then opened allowing the pressure of the ocean to flood the bottom of the tube and force the baffle and payload upwards. Once the payload reaches a high enough altitude, rockets fire to boost it into orbit.

Another interesting concept is to spin the payload on a gyroscope with a horizontal axis. When everything is spinning fast enough, the payload is released upward into the atmosphere. Again, at a sufficient altitude, rockets fire boosting the payload the rest of the way into orbit.

Neither of these concepts appears in the book. I ran across them over the last decade. The author's concept is equally interesting/plausible. Back to the review.]

The space elevator's terrestrial base will be on Mount Kilimanjaro. Corporate/tribal/government negotiations make this possible. The reader never really experiences that process.

The company building the space elevator contracts out the construction of the sled to the family of one of the upper corporate executives. The corporate executives don't know about the relationship between the family and the executive that granted the construction contract. The family is an influential tribe in Africa.

The family needs a good location to build the sled. The best location they can find is the side of an active volcano that is controlled by another family. Well the land is controlled by the other family. But do they also control the volcano?

There is some modest family/tribal intrigue as the contract represents a windfall. Many of the family members are just living off of the trust without doing much to replenish those funds. There is a strong temptation to use the seed money to refill the trust rather than actually build the sled.

As an added feature, one of the family members is reputed to be the physical incarnation of a minor snake goddess. One of the younger family members somehow becomes the new manifestation of the goddess. There are religious/metaphysical connotations for the volcano as well. I'm not a fan of supernatural/religious agents actively influencing the plot of a science fiction novel. That other stuff is more properly situated in a fantasy novel.

There are moments of tension within the story. In some cases, the characters have to work through a problem. In a few cases, a modest amount of hand-wavium makes the problems go away. Characters experience the unavoidable consequences of aging, but otherwise, they never lose when they encounter a challenge.

The biggest reason why I just couldn't give this book 4 stars is that there isn't a whole lot of "science" in this supposed tale of "science fiction". The production of the cable happens elsewhere. The design of the space station is ever so briefly discussed within the context of governmental and corporate negotiations regarding the construction of the space station. The design of the sled is pre-packaged to the point where the construction of the sled facility occurs primarily in the background.

The one element that the book got exactly correct is the desire to keep any government from controlling the project. Corporations aren't presented as infallible, just better at managing large-scale projects.

Another enjoyable element was setting the story on the African continent. Rather than showing western governments and corporations rushing to "exploit" the locals, this story focuses on people engaging with one another as equally capable agents advancing their own interests while working to cooperate with others.

The plot was interesting even if it didn't contain much "science". The characters were well-developed. Overall, it was an enjoyable read that held my attention. The author clearly has the skills needed to write engaging books.

In summary, the following kept me from giving this a high rating:

- a focus on family dynamics
- a focus on corporate negotiations
- a dearth of real "science"
- religious/metaphysical deities influencing the plot


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Thursday, April 20, 2023

Review: Cirsova Magazine of Thrilling Adventure and Daring Suspense Issue #12 / Fall 2022

Cirsova Magazine of Thrilling Adventure and Daring Suspense Issue #12 / Fall 2022Cirsova Magazine of Thrilling Adventure and Daring Suspense Issue #12 / Fall 2022 by David Skinner
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

This is a 2-star review.

I haven't checked in with Cirsova for some time. The last time I read it, the stories were all self-contained. This issue had more stories that were part of a series. So I was jumping into the middle of a tale in some cases.

I read a couple of other stories and they simply didn't hold my interest.

I've been rooting for this periodical as I appreciate the pulp style that it embraces. The stories in this issue just didn't measure up.

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Monday, April 17, 2023

Review: Summer's End

Summer's EndSummer's End by John Van Stry
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3.5-star review. Every time I talked myself into rounding it up to 4 stars, I found another reason to make it 3 stars.

I picked up Summer's End because it is a finalist for this year's Prometheus Award given to works of fiction that explore or incorporate libertarian themes. Prometheus Award winners are almost always pretty good. This is a worthy finalist.

Our protagonist is Dave "Mongoose" Walker. A former gang-banger who was literally scared straight and made it through enough college to get a certificate as a 5th-class engineer. In the opening pages, his brother tells him trouble is coming Dave's way. His brother has acquired an engineering position for him on a tramp starship. Go now. Dave does.

The author does a great job of using Dave to bring us into a reality of interplanetary travel and settlement. Dave learns a bit about repairing/maintaining various parts of the ship. But we are spared the description of weeks of travel between destinations. This keeps the story/action moving and interesting.

Dave has all sorts of unusual challenges tossed his way. His biological mother's new-ish husband wants him dead for political reasons. Dave ends up being taken by pirates/buccaneers (there apparently is a useful difference). He just happens to have a skill that he can use to negotiate for his release.

This leads to one major criticism of the book. Coincidence. While every book has to have a specific set of narrative circumstances occur for the book to make sense, it begins to strain credulity when, later in the book, so many of Dave's issues are either caused by and/or resolved by people that were tangentially introduced earlier in the book. And in most cases, those people all know each other in some capacity or another independent of their relationship with Dave. The world is a small place, but it ain't that small. Also, there are more than a few occasions where a character that is of interest to Dave for one reason just happens to have the skill set needed to solve an unrelated problem that Dave is dealing with.

A second criticism is basic spelling, grammar, and wordsmithery. A common complaint that I hear about books published by Baen is that there isn't any clear indication of editorial input. The spelling and grammar errors were just enough to tip my inner editor. There were a few instances where I found the phrasing of a sentence or a paragraph needed to require required* re-reading a few times to determine what the author was intending to say. 

A third criticism is how the author treats a sizeable number of female characters. They are "hot". Hot as in "Hot babe sittin' beside me in my 'Cuda." At least one other review notes that female characters are "frustratingly" undeveloped. With the exception of Dave and one or maybe two other main characters, all of the other characters are undeveloped.

Take away (or diminish) two of those criticisms and this becomes a solid 4-star review (maybe 4.5) as the author does a very good job of incorporating a lot of real-world social structures and issues. He dials them up a bit and projects current trends to create a believable future where people are leaving Earth to avoid overregulation. He also points out that leaving Earth is not a panacea; some new polities develop some pretty horrendous beliefs and corporations really aren't to be trusted.

The slow burn in the book is about social structures and trust. Dave succeeds because he demonstrates himself to be worthy of trust primarily because his life has shown him that trust is the only real value a person has. Gangs, families, business partners, corporations, neighborhoods, cities, and societies all rely on high levels of trust if they are going to continue to exist.

The characters and plot were compelling enough to keep me reading all the way to the end. The conclusion was satisfying. I'd like to read more about all of these characters in the future and see if the author can develop them more fully.

*Read the text that was striked out.  Read the replacement.  Which one reads more clearly.  This book contained too many similar passages.  

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Monday, March 6, 2023

A Quilt for Sherwood

Sherwood and I have never met.  Never shared "meat space" as the cool kids would say.

Back in the early-ish days of the Internet, there was a thing called Usenet.  There were a myriad of groups representing a broad range of interests.  In particular, there was a group called rec.arts.comics.strips where people that enjoyed comic strips got together to discuss comic strips.

You might call us "strippers" but we preferred the term RACSals.  Or I did.

Sherwood was there.  As was I.

We didn't agree on a lot of things.  Mostly we disagreed about politics.  We both loved comic strips.

It turns out that we shared a number of other interests such as photography, blogging, and a bit of Irish ancestry.  

I'm not one for calling someone a "friend" at the drop of a hat.  I am not Clintonian in that way.  Sherwood will groan and think "oh that Dann" if he ever reads this.  Some of you kids won't get it without taking a deep dive into the ancient American period of history known as the 1990s.

Despite those disagreements, we shared enough experiences over the years that I consider him a friend.  We are connected on Facebook where we touch base from time to time.

Courtesy of my love of comic strips, I have a significant collection of fabrics featuring the characters from Charles Shultz's "Peanuts".  It is not a small amount of my inventory.

I needed a new quilting project at roughly the time that Sherwood retired from his career as a professor of astronomy.  Retirees take naps.  Naps frequently require quilts.  And we both appreciated comic strips.

Viola!  Inspiration!

I am a big fan of Joe Cunningham and his "rock the block, album style" process for making quilts.  You can take his class (pattern-free quilt making) online and learn four different quilting processes.  I think his perspective regarding quilt design is interesting.

I've made one other quilt using that process for Baby Rose.  That quilt used a stack of fabrics that varied by color, but shared a general visual texture between the various colors.  They all had an imprinted bubble pattern.  They all had color shifts that were similar in process even if they differed in colors.

Sherwood's quilt uses several fabrics that differ quite a bit.  Most of the fabrics have Peanuts characters.  Most of them include some shade of green.  But there wasn't really enough to tie them together in the same way that young Miss Rose's quilt came together.

Color selection aside, I also learned a bit about strip design when using the "rock the block, album style" process.  Joe's process is to use random-width strips.  The only important feature is that the strips have parallel edges.  Then you sew the strips together to make a wide panel.

The rest of the process involves cutting these new panels across the seams into more strips.  These new strips are assembled into strips, cut into smaller strips, and finally assembled into squares.

Take the class to get the details.  It is worth the price.

With all of this slicing and dicing of fabrics, a narrow strip used in the first panel of strips can be a pain in the arse.  It will probably get sliced and diced down into a very small piece indeed.  

Every quilt is an opportunity to learn.  This time I learned to value a bit of restraint when selecting the number of fabrics used in a quilt and to avoid using narrow strips when building panels.

With all of that said, I like the way the quilt came out.

Sherwood's quilt - click to embiggen

Sherwood's quilt - click to embiggen and check out the stitching pattern

Sherwood's quilt - laying it out - click to embiggen

A modest update.  I always ask for a photo of the quilt with the recipient for my little bit of posterity.  Sherwood was kind enough to provide a few.  The first one is himself and his quilt.  The second two show some details of the quilting pattern used to nail the whole thing together.  

For the record, I had someone else do the pattern quilting.  I made the top and did the binding.

As above...click to embiggen.