Review: Heart of the Mountain

Heart of the Mountain by Larry Correia
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

This is a 5-star review. That covers my experience with the entire series.

Larry Correia has managed the difficult task of writing a 6-book series with a cascade of challenges faced by our hero and his friends. Usually, making the "big bad" of each book bigger and badder than the previous book means that the "big bad" in the last book is just unbelievable.

Not so in this case.

The resolve at the end of the book allows great closure for all of the characters that the reader has become familiar with. Buy the series. Sit back. Enjoy the ride. It's worth every penny.

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Review: A Strange Penance

A Strange Penance by Cassandra Byrne
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3-star review. More like 3.5 stars but not enough to push it to 4.

This is a pretty good story about a guy who just wants to go back to a time when his mom read him books. But life hands him a shit sandwich and he ends up being a pretty rough and tumble character in trouble with the authorities and set on a bad path.

Things go bad. And then worse. And a little better. If you don't think about the plot much, this is a pretty good story. By the end, I wanted to know more about the characters.

But it ends just as the characters and the story are going someplace. It really felt like the start of a pretty good novella rather than the beginning-middle-end of a short story. Kind of frustrating, but in a good way.

However, when you think about the story, there are a couple of elements that really stick out. The first is the power imbalance between our anti-hero and his benefactor. In any other tale, we would questioned the benefactor's motives and certainly questioned whether the power imbalance would allowed any long-term relationship to be legitimate/successful.

The second is that the relationship between our anti-hero and his benefactor at the end of the story isn't really earned. A little work...just a couple of sentences...earlier in the story to justify the later relationship would have been enough. Call it Chekov's Love Gun.

I'm not giving away the details as I don't want to spoil the story. It is worth a read. Give it a buy/try.

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Minor edits for grammar 2/20/2025

Review: The Incident with the Pirate

The Incident with the Pirate by Cassandra Byrne
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

This is a 5-star review.

I don't want to spoil a great story. Spend a buck and buy this. Very well done.

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Review: The Innocence of Death

The Innocence of Death by E.G. Stone
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

This is a 2-star review which is a charitable rating. This book was a hard DNF - Dorothy Parker would be proud of how far I heaved this one.

Our protagonist is a marketing guru. Death decides he needs help polishing up his image and gives our "hero" a choice; die right here and now or serve Death in the hereafter. He goes with option 2.

Shortly thereafter, our hero finds himself with some sort of eternal computer connected to various social networks and an administrative assistant. She is some sort of troll/giant/something big.

Usually, the fish spends more time pondering the lack of water before figuring out how things work. In this book, our protagonist slips into his new role with little muss and less fuss. I checked out when his administrative assistant sits on a sofa that cartoonishly bends/tilts to force our hero to slide down into her.

The plot had generally lost me, and that sort of cartoonish action caused me to move onto something else. Skip this and read something good.

If you want to experience a "fish out of water" and "hero dies and lives on in the hereafter" book, then please read "On A Pale Horse" by Piers Anthony. The first 6 books of that series are great.

But stop after book 6. Please.

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Modest edits for grammar/spelling 2/20/2025

Review: Iron Truth

Iron Truth by S.A. Tholin
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3-star review which is a fair estimate of my experience.

This book won the Self Published Science Fiction Contest.

The first three fourths of the book was really pretty good. Solid sci-fi involving colony ships, crash landings, and weird worlds. Then it diverted into some religious stuff.

I'm OK with religion in fantasy. And faith in some unknowable whatever in sci-fi is OK. But when you suggest that there is an active, mystical component in sci-fi, it stops being sci-fi for me. The last quarter of the book lost me.

Well written, but the plot went off the rails.

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