Wednesday, June 4, 2025

Review: By Blood, by Salt

By Blood, by Salt (Land of Exile, #1)By Blood, by Salt by J.L. Odom
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

This is a 4-star review. Probably closer to 3.5 stars would be my experience.

Our hero is Azetla who is the member of a desert race/tribe that is oppressed by the dominant culture. He maintains fidelity to his religion via prayer and ritual. His habits risk his life as the Emperor hates his people and they can be killed almost anywhere for almost any reason. There are holiday celebrations where members of Azetla's tribe are ritually murdered to appease the dominant deities of the Empire.

By the start of the book, he has made himself valuable enough that he is second-in-command of a combat battalion of hardened troops.

The intrigue begins with the Emperor's cousin lending credence to a group plotting a coup. The cousin is lacks any real spine, but he has been talked into participating.

The one group that the Emperor hates more than Azetla's tribe are the devils that live in the deep desert. The Emperor's cousin finds himself "leading" the battalion on a mission into the desert to capture a devil. They do. The captain of the battalion is killed in the process and Azetla finds himself in command. That is the first third of the book.

The rest is imperial intrigue, the movement of the battalion to a remote city, and the maneuvering of Azetla to stay alive. The most "fantastic/fantasy" element is the devil who seems to be super fast, tough, and quite accurate with a bow. She is captured and held in bondage until Azetla is in need of her fighting ability.

He turns her loose. At that point, she could run away at almost any time. And yet she stays. Supposedly a captive, but held without bonds and without any person promise to not escape. It's kind of weird.

This tale is barely getting started by the end of the book. It is clear that the story will take at least another book or two to complete.

The world building is complex. The characters are engaging. The premise is promising. But I'm not sure it is enough for me to continue.

I bought the book because it won the SPFBO competition this year. I my experience, SPFBO winners are almost always great reads. This is a good read. Give it a chance as it might suit your tastes more than mine.

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Review: The Dream of the Iron Dragon

The Dream of the Iron Dragon (Saga of the Iron Dragon #1)The Dream of the Iron Dragon by Robert Kroese
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3-star review.

While I have greatly enjoyed other books by this author, this one was a bit pedestrian. The crew of a spaceship attempts to save themselves with a radical last ditch maneuver that tosses them back thousands of years into the past. They crash land back on Earth. The original intent was to use their modern tech to survive until they could effect repairs or they were otherwise rescued.

Their ship is in pieces. There is next to nothing left of their tech. So they must make themselves useful to the locals by using their knowledge of science and math.

Interesting premise. Reasonable well told.

But the obvious beginning of a much longer series with no significant problem resolution present in the first book. Not enough here for me to consider coming back to the series.

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Review: Chloe's Kingdom: The Koin Vault Heist

Chloe's Kingdom: The Koin Vault Heist (Stellar Heist Book 1)Chloe's Kingdom: The Koin Vault Heist by Gregory Michael
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

This is a 2-star review. The spelling and grammar were very good. The story and characters were not compelling enough to make me want to continue after the first few chapters.

Thereafter rose the putative ghost of Dorothy Parker.

I'm glad to have supported the author with a purchase of the book as he supported the idea of respectful disagreement and free speech when another author was bounced from the SPSFC earlier this year.

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Review: Dark Day, Bright Hour

Dark Day, Bright HourDark Day, Bright Hour by Julie Frost
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3-star review.

The book tells the story of a soul bound for Heaven that finds herself in hell with her guardian angel who is trying to help her find a way out.

This is a light/breezy fantasy story set within a Christian cosmos. If the works of C.S. Lewis (Chronicles of Narnia, etc.) are heavy weight Christian theology in a fantasy setting, this is a cotton candy version of the same. Decent writing. I enjoyed the book.

The ending was less than surprising.

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Review: Invisible Women: Data Bias in a World Designed for Men

Invisible Women: Data Bias in a World Designed for MenInvisible Women: Data Bias in a World Designed for Men by Caroline Criado Pérez
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3-star review. That is the average that I give as there are excellent parts of the book and some poor parts of the book.

I learned about this book by hearing an interview of the author on Bari Weiss' "Honestly" podcast. That is a podcast worth following, FWIW.

As presented in the interview, the premise of the book is that humanity does not generate nearly enough sex disaggregated data to allow us to make informed regulatory and policy choices on issues that specifically impact women. Women are different from men (I caution gender identitarians to avoid reading this book) and using non-disaggregated data that presumes the male body to be the "standard" actively harms women.

I like data. I like seeing how data can be used to improve everyone's quality of life. The premise (above) was very interesting to me. I was already aware of the medical impact of non-disaggregated data impacting women in the healthcare field (imagine drug qualification trials where women are a fraction of the human testing pool) and found the author's perspective as presented in the interview to be compelling.

And had the book stuck to that premise and demonstrated a commitment to basing all the arguments are hard data (rather than anecdata), I would have loved the book, and learned from the book.

But, no.

In a rarity, I am turning on my Kindle notes. I frequently found myself arguing with the author about either her use of highly selective data, the lack of evolutionary context, or her wandering from a discussion of statistically significant conclusions and into political opinion. More on the latter later.

The author uses questionable sources a few times. Vox.com is not a serious news source for this sort of work. The author leans heavily on one or two organizations that have an ideological objective. It would have been helpful if she could have presented more complimentary data examples from non-biased sources.

A few times, she takes tangential data and strings it into broad commentary on all human cultures as if an authoritative conclusion was justified. Admittedly, the book is about the lack of gender segregated data for a reason. There isn't much of it out there. And what is out there doesn't always paint a flattering picture of society. By the same token, one would not look at a wild game trail in the middle of the woods and extrapolate it into a 6-lane divided highway.

There were many occasions where I found myself asking why the author didn't refer to any biological/evolutionary context. In some cases, the author demonstrates her ignorance of processes that are beyond her experience. One example is a passage where she points out that bricks/blocks used in construction are too heavy for most women to effectively lift. If those bricks/blocks were lighter, then more women could participate in that sort of construction. What she ignores is that the bricks/blocks are as heavy as most men can lift on purpose. Smaller bricks/blocks means that more layers of bricks/blocks must be placed which means more mortar work needs to be done. Building a wall 8 blocks high with 8 lifts of mortar requires less precision mortaring work than building the same height wall with smaller blocks (i.e., 16 half-height blocks high with 16 lifts/layers of mortar). The bricks/blocks aren’t designed to be heavy for the purpose of excluding women from the construction field. They are designed to minimize the amount of precision mortar work to be performed.

As the author documents, there are significant physical differences resulting from the evolution of men and women. Some of those differences result in different abilities. Would the author suggest that the standard ballerina shoes be made bigger to make it easier for a 6-foot, 220-pound construction work to compete for prima ballerina?

There are many, many passages where the author successfully documents both the need for sex disaggregated data sets and how such information might be used in the future to improve polices and regulations. There are parts of the book that are absolutely 4-star and 5-star worthy. There are excellent sections detailing how both medical and automotive research/design suffer from the lack of sex disaggregated data.

I checked out in Chapter 14 because the author chose to go political. She asserted that the only reason Hillary Clinton didn't get elected was because of anti-woman bias.

No.

The objective of an informed electorate should be to select an intelligent and capable officeholder that will produce net-positive change on society.

Hillary Clinton is ineligible to be described as fulfilling that objective. A complete description of her lack of qualifications is beyond the scope of a Goodreads review but may be read HERE.

At this point, it became clear that the author possessed serious experiential deficiencies. I opted to accept the positive sections as welcome pieces of new information and move onto something better. I'm labeling this as a plain DNF rather than a Dorothy Parker-esque finish as I made it most of the way through and the book does contain a wealth of valuable information and perspectives. But it isn't the homerun that I was anticipating when I opened the book for the first time.



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