Sunday, December 20, 2020

What Does A Quilt Cost

 A friend asked a question of me that I had not heard before.  They asked if I was accepting orders for quilts.  The short answer to that question is "no", but there is a longer answer.

I have read about other quilters opening up the possibility of creating a quilt in exchange for cash.  The responses to the associated costs are generally a sense of shock with a sprinkling of outrage.  When the costs of a quilt get broken down, it suddenly becomes a less attractive option.

Most of my quilts are created for babies. They measure a little under 5 feet by 5 feet.  That works out to 25 square feet or roughly 2.8 square yards.  

Most fabric comes on a bolt that is close to 40" wide; that a bit over 1 yard.  We can talk about yards of material as a linear measurement or an area measurement and the result is essentially the same.

For most of those baby quilts, I buy somewhere between 4 and 5 yards of material.  I buy material on sale when I can get it.  I also know a couple of online stores where I can get pretty good prices from time to time.  But there are also times when I pay FLEET pricing; Full List Each and Every Time.  As a gross average, let's use $10 per yard of material.  That works out to $50 for just the material to make the top.

Then there is batting that goes in the middle.  I generally get it on sale.  Using $15 per yard, then we have another $30 as you always get a little more than you really need.

Finally, there is the backing material.  Due to the size of the quilts, you have to use a wider material width.  Those easily run $12 per yard and sometimes more.  There is another $24 in material cost.

The total fabric cost then runs to roughly $100.  That doesn't include thread or any of the other consumable supplies.  It also doesn't cover the cost of time.  A baby quilt takes me roughly 20 hours to complete.  What is the value of my time based on the quality of work that I do? 

Consider that fast food joints in my area are hiring people with no experience at $10 per hour.  Consider that shops are hiring people in my area with no experience at $14-16 per hour.  There are costs (i.e. employers portion of the payroll taxes, etc.) on top of that.

I've made over 20 quilts and learned a bit on each one.  Mostly I've learned what not to do, but that is another story.

While my work won't win any awards, it's also not exactly beginner level work either.  I'd feel pretty good about asking for $20 per hour or about $400 for a baby quilt for labor.  That makes the total about $500.  

If we are talking about a queen or king-sized quilt, then you end up multiplying that by at least 3.  It's a lot of work and material!

And that is why I give quilts away.  I know I've done my level best and have provided them with a visually interesting piece of work.  It's the one part of the process that is mine to control.  I don't have to put a price tag on the quilt.  The kind words of thanks and stories about the kids that grew up dragging their quilts around the house are more valuable to me than the cost of the materials and time spent making them.

If I start doing it for money, then the entire activity becomes something else.  Something that has to be justified rather than appreciated. 


Friday, December 18, 2020

A Quilt for Tracy

 This one won't go on Facebook until late in 2021.  Why?  Because my sister-in-law won't receive it until Christmas of 2021.  Don't ask me.  I just make 'em.

My beloved bride wanted me to make a quilt for my sister-in-law, Tracy.  She found some Michigan State fabric.  Apparently, Tracy is a fan.  Who knew!

I wasn't sure what I wanted to make and as time was short at the end of the year, I opted for a pretty standard approach.  I used a solid block of material alternated with a 9-patch of fabrics.  

We had four different fabrics.  I created a mix of three-square strips and then semi-randomly assembled sets of those strips into a 9-patch.

The result was pretty easy as well as visually interesting.




Now my beloved bride always thinks that the back of a quilt should be "soft".  "Soft" fabrics like flannel or fleece are a bear to work with as they aren't dimensionally stable.  They will stretch if pulled.  A stretch back means that the front will pucker when the back is allowed to relax.  Alternatively, if you don't have enough tension on the back, then it will pucker.

I'm not terribly happy with the back on this quilt.


In any case, don't anyone tell Tracy. We wouldn't want to ruin next year's Christmas for her!

A modest update.  Christmas 2021 came and went with the quilt not being presented.  Why, you may well ask.  Because I found out late in the season that a quilt was also needed for my other sister-in-law, Holly.  I just didn't have the time to get that second quilt completed.

But this is a new year and quilts have been gifted.  Here is Tracy with hers.

Tracy with her quilt.  Click to embiggen.









A Quilt for Baby Rose

 Another nephew and his beloved bride decided to have a baby this year.  They are doing it the old-fashioned way and are waiting for the doctor to tell them if the baby has a port or a dongle after the little squab has been delivered.  Those crazy kids.

I had my eye on the fabrics in this quilt right about the time that I had time to work on a new quilt.  I have also been aching to produce a quilt using Joe Cunningham's "Rock the Block - Album Style" approach.  Joe doesn't really teach a pattern as much as he teaches a concept of artistic discovery.  He has a class on Craftsy.  It's actually a class that presents four different variations on a general approach.  It's a very good value if you are into quilting and want to expand beyond just following someone else's pattern.

I used a bit of this general technique on the quilt that I made for young Lincoln earlier this year.  But now I've had a chance to use Joe's approach on a complete quilt.

The fabrics come from a series by Wilmington Essentials called Gems Bubble Up.  If you look close, you can see the bubbles.  They're everywhere!

I did try to do a little free-hand quilting.  It didn't turn out very nice.  So I went back to the old standby...straight lines!



I learned a couple things this time around.  One is to be careful about using too many narrow strips.  If you buy the class, you'll know what I'm talking about.  There is such a thing as too many narrow strips just as there is such a thing as too many wide strips.

I also learned to mix it up a bit.  I made a bunch of sections with narrower strips and a bunch of sections with somewhat wider strips.  Then when it came time to put things together, I tried to put the two sections together to generate some unusual patterns.

Lastly, make lots of extra pieces. I thought I had way too much fabric.  It turns out I barely had enough.  I was hoping to have some extras so that I could play around with the pieces when it came time to put them together.  Not having a stack of spares restricted my results.

My next quilt will probably use some of the techniques that I used in this quilt.  I found an image.  I have a plan.  Y'all will have to wait and see!

A Quilt For Kingston

 Our nephew and his girlfriend decided to bifurcate this year.  As one does, one makes a quilt!

As luck would have it, we made a run to Indiana earlier this year.  This was in late May and the lockdown had gotten us down.  Indiana was open for business.  We hopped over the border to do a little shopping and to have some dinner in a restaurant.

While out and about, we found a little hole-in-the-wall Joann's.  It was easily the smallest Joann's that I've ever seen.  And I've seen a few, too!

While wandering around the fabric, we came across the two fabrics that were used for this quilt.  We had no idea how it would get used or who would be getting it.  We didn't even know about our nephew's pending baby.



Lo and behold we got the news a couple months later.  For a change, I didn't have to run off to find fabric as we already had it in inventory.

As things worked out, the quilt was delivered a bit before Kingston.  Our nephew and his girlfriend do good work.


Welcome to the family, King!

Tuesday, December 15, 2020

Review: Hammer and Tongs and a Rusty Nail

Hammer and Tongs and a Rusty NailHammer and Tongs and a Rusty Nail by Ian Tregillis
My rating: 1 of 5 stars

This is a 1-star review. That accurately reflects my experience.

As this is really just a short story, the review will be equally short.

Tor published this short story that is part of George R.R. Martin's "Wild Cards" universe. I made it 20% of the way through before stopping. At that point, I really didn't care about the characters and really didn't have a great idea of their abilities or limitations. I've enjoyed all of the other Wild Cards stories I've ever read.

I might have continued on and given this a 2 or a 3-star rating. But the publisher and their copyeditor didn't show up for this project. It seemed like there was a spelling issue on every other page. Mostly just missing spaces that were needed to split up two words that had mistakenly conjoined.

The author didn't care enough to run spell-check. The editor didn't care enough to do the same thing. Avoid this story and move onto the next.

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Wednesday, November 25, 2020

Review: Soulsmith

Soulsmith Soulsmith by Will Wight
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

This is a 2-star review which is a reasonable measure of my experience.

I read the first book in the series a couple of years ago. The narrative of the second book in the series picks up as if the reader is going immediately from the first book to the second. Rather than being a series of books, it appears that the author intends to write a single, long book.

I simply had no engagement with the characters in the first few chapters that I read. So I'm passing on the rest of the series.

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Sunday, November 1, 2020

Donald Trump 2020

Please join me in a brief trip back in time to 2016. The two dominant candidates for President were Hillary Clinton and Donald Trump. At the time, I considered Donald Trump to be ineligible as a matter of character and experience for my vote for that high office. He had no useful government experience and his character...well it wasn't good.

The same was true about Hillary Clinton; her record in public office is abysmal and her character...again, not good.

So I voted for a candidate that did have a record of success in office and was of good character; Gary Johnson. I still think America would be a better place in 2020 if he had been elected.

Jumping back to a few days before election day, what do we have.

Donald Trump, whose character remains...not good. Anyone who read his book "The Art of The Deal" would instantly recognize the egotism that has been at the center of the Presidency for almost four years. He believed then and he believes today that if he thinks something is a good idea, then everyone should believe it is a good idea. He governs from his gut. We have been fortunate in that his gut is occasionally aligned with the interests of the American people.

While his character hasn't changed, his experience in office has certainly changed. While we cast our votes for the candidate, in reality, we are voting for the team that will form their administration. And the Trump administration has been reasonably successful at producing policies that are in the interests of the American people.

The following is in no particular order and some of these items may well overlap.

The Good
  • NATO - NATO lived for decades under the American defensive umbrella. After the fall of the Iron Curtain, NATO countries began to skimp on their commitment to the alliance. Mr. Obama complained about the same issue. Mr. Trump did something productive to get the individual nations to increase their defense spending. He also re-aligned our deployment posture in Europe to better contain Russia.
  • Iran - Mr. Trump got us out of that disastrous "deal" that allowed Iran to develop a nuclear weapons capability and re-instituted sanctions that will hopefully undermine the theocrats and give the Iranian people a shot at having a civilized government. He also put the Iranian regime on notice that targeting our troops in Iraq was unacceptable behavior by targeting General Sulemani.
  • ISIS/ISIL - After the US struggled for 8 years of feckless leadership under Mr. Obama, Mr. Trump made the moves necessary to put down ISIS in about 6 months.
  • Israel - Given that the various terrorist (or terrorist adjacent) organizations that run the PA, it was time for the region to move on. The administration has brokered a series of peace deals that will hopefully foster long-lasting peace in the region. If Mr. Trump were a Democrat, the Nobel committee would be grasping for ways to award him multiple Peace Prizes in one year.
  • Taxes - He led the effort to cut middle-class taxes. He cut corporate taxes making America a competitive option for corporations which in turn means more American jobs. He capped SALT deductions for the rich.
  • Constitution and Laws - Oddly enough Mr. Trump has moved the government back towards operating under a Constitutional constraint. He is enforcing laws passed by Congress and he is undoing anti-Constitutional directives from past Presidents. For the last ~20 years, American law has expected that our embassy in Israel would be located in the Israeli capital of Jerusalem. Mr. Trump made it happen. For the last ~30 years, American law has expected the government to collect those who enter/stay in our country [illegally] and send them home. There is no allowance for Presidential whims. The Trump administration enforced the law as written and passed. He even supported a change in our immigration policies by suggesting that Congress do its job and pass a new immigration law. We do not need any more Presidential "pen and phone" activities. We need Congress to assert its rightful place by passing detailed laws which are then enforced by the administration.
  • Supreme Court - I'm frankly tickled pink by two of his three successful nominations to the Supreme Court. Neal Gorsuch has a demonstrable small "l" libertarian streak. I think Justice Kavanaugh has a similar temperament. It's too early to know about Justice Coney-Barrett, but it looks like she will be a third Trump appointee that is solidly in support of the Constitution as written and amended. It is a document that was written to constrain government power with an expansive view towards the liberty of the individual. Coupled with Justice Thomas, we might finally have a court that will take a stand against the modern administrative state and force Congress to do its job, legislate, and restrain any administration from using Presidential edicts as a means of creating new laws out of whole cloth. For those that don't want a "strong man" style President to run free in the country, a Supreme Court populated with originalists is your best defense.
  • Regulations - Mr. Trump established that any agency seeking to create a new regulation had to identify two old regulations to be eliminated. The net result is that business activity increased in this modestly reduced regulatory environment.
  • The Economy - Prior to Covid, the economy was running great. The Obama administration told us that 6% unemployment and 1-2% annual GDP growth was as good as it was going to get for the foreseeable future. Due in part to the administration's tax and regulatory policies, unemployment ended up close to 3.5% with the lowest black and hispanic unemployment since those statistics were first measured. GDP growth was over 2%. And, most importantly, the income of the bottom quintile started going up faster than that of the upper quintile. That hasn't happened in decades.
  • Veterans - Under the prior administration, the Veterans Administration was killing veterans via neglect. Bonuses were being paid based on budget compliance rather than on how effectively veterans' health issues were being resolved. The VA is currently far better. Further improvements can and should be made. It is also obvious that the current administration is focused on serving veterans rather than considering them to be a budgetary liability.
  • The Media - While not an unvarnished success, he...or more correctly his various spokespersons...have had a pretty good record of pointing out the inconsistencies in the reporting by most of the major media organizations. In particular, Kayleigh McEnany and her binder of past news stories have been a godsend. The media is, on average, far to the left of the average American. They stopped with any pretense of reporting news in a non-partisan manner decades ago. Someone needs to point that out. As a big plus, while Mr. Trump has been verbally abusive towards the press, he has never sent federal agents to investigate reporters as was more common in the Mr. Obama's administration.
The Meh

  • Iraq/Syria/Afghanistan - Let's be honest, those countries are a geopolitical mess. I can't say that Mr. Trump made any substantive progress, but he hasn't taken those nations backward. Those nations are independent actors and there are simply times when even the President of the United States is unable to move things in a positive direction. That is particularly true when other actors (i.e. Iran, Turkey, and Russia) are seeking to influence things in a different direction.
  • North Korea - Mr. Trump's hot and cold diplomacy ran from brinkmanship to near fawning of Kim Jong Il. The result did little to change North Korea's relationship with the rest of the world. He tried. Every President tries. He fared no better and no worse than the rest.
  • Trade - This is a bit of a mix. On the one hand, he did get some modest concessions from Mexico and Canada in the USMCA deal. And his use of tariffs has somewhat moderated China's behavior. Those aren't big successes, but they are successes. On the flip side, the tariffs have taken more out of American pockets due to increases in the cost of imports. The trade deficit hasn't changed and may have gotten slightly worse. I'll give him credit for trying to correct the severe imbalance in our trade relationships around the world. Past administrations did a poor job of negotiating those deals. Mr. Trump simply wasn't able to do accomplish anymore.
  • Border/Immigration - This has been a bit of a mixed bag. Illegal immigration has slowed somewhat. The child separation process was conducted in a ham-handed manner. Separating children to ensure that they are not being trafficked is a sound objective. Failing to adequately document who those children were with so they could be returned to their legitimate parents once the parents were sent home was a failure. Simply failing to document the disposition of their cases in a transparent manner was a public relations failure.
The Bad

  • Corona Virus - While a bit of a mixed bag, there is just far too much negative for this to go in the Meh bag. Mr. Trump has done some things well. Shutting down immigration from China early on was a sound and productive step. His task force focused on getting ventilator production up to speed. He had the military supplement overwhelmed hospitals for the 1-2 month period where such support was critical. His administration has moved several solutions for a vaccine quickly down the development process so that we might all put this contagion behind us. But...
    • he remains focused on the economy to the detriment of all other concerns. Having a job is great. Being alive to work that job is a bit more important.
    • In the early days of the virus, the CDC and FDA insisted on running their standard playbook rather than using the proven testing regimes from Europe or South Korea. In that crucial period where we fell far behind in testing, we needed more Trump, and we go got less.
    • In the early days, we were told that masks were not effective. That was a lie told to prevent people from buying up all of the masks (N95 and otherwise) that were going to be sorely needed in various healthcare settings. He should have made those FDA and CDC bureaucrats tell the truth; masks work to varying degrees but are most needed elsewhere. He could have made it patriotic to wear a less effective homemade mask, but he didn't.
    • There is probably a whole other essay in the wings about the effectiveness of various masks. What isn't in question is that N95 masks work. While the government accelerated the production of ventilators and vaccines, I've seen no real effort to increase the American production of N95 masks. They should be so plentiful that they should have been sold at every street corner convenience store at half the pre-Covid price. There should be official government videos playing to demonstrate how they are effectively fitted to individual users. Government notices to "cover the nose AND mouth" should routinely be a part of Facebook, Twitter, YouTube, Google, etc. advertising.
    The sad truth is that Mr. Trump missed so many opportunities to easily improve the Covid problem. And he missed all of them.
  • Character - Donald Trump lacks character. His history of womanizing (to say the least) and serial infidelities marks him as a person who can (and probably will) turn on anyone who trusts him.

    His business acumen is correctly described as patchwork at best. He borrows large sums for his businesses, takes a hefty cut for himself, and then leaves the investors holding the bag when the company goes into bankruptcy. Again, and again, and again.

    While many criticize Mr. Trump for his crude and boorish statements/tweets, I think the larger problem is his utter lack of strategy. A President can be crude from time to time, but it should be done with an eye towards a larger purpose. As an example, sticking his rhetorical thumb in the eye of the media is sorely needed from time to time. Labeling every news piece that describes him or his administration critically as "fake news" devalues the meaning of words like "fact" and "truth". Donald Trump is pointlessly crude and someone needs to [take away his Twitter account.]

    His random positions and odd statements made it so that men of high character could not serve in the administration in good conscience. If people like Jim Mattis and John Kelly couldn't be convinced to stay, then there is a serious problem in the Whitehouse.
This Was Avoidable

We didn't have to be in the current situation. Jim Webb ran for the Presidency in 2016. Rather than supporting a true moderate with sound character and a successful record in public office, the Democrats went for Hillary Clinton. In 2016, I would have gladly considered voting for Jim Webb instead of Gary Johnson.

Rather than come back to the middle in 2020 and run a true American unity ticket, the Democrats ran a slate of leftists. Joe Biden has never been a centrist. He has always been in the center of the Democrat party. Given that the Democrat party has been infiltrated by people that share more ideology with the World Workers Party than anyone else, the leftward drift of the Democrats has pulled old Joe leftward. Their influence is reflected in their party platform which is about as far left as that party has ever been in my lifetime.

Joe Biden, personally, is suspect. If the phrase "appearance of impropriety" is to have any useful meaning, then the revelations about his and Hunter's activities should be sufficient to have excluded him from consideration by the Democrats. Add to that the obvious signs that Mr. Biden is beginning to show some signs of his age. Add to that his counterproductive record as a legislator. Joe Biden was ineligible for my vote in 1988 because he was a typical gaffe-prone legislator. Now he is much older and certainly not nearly as sharp.

Kamala Harris is another politician that has just been wrong on the issues for far too long. As a prosecutor, she put tens of thousands of minorities behind bars for marijuana possession. Now she laughs off marijuana as a non-issue without bothering to apologize for her past actions. Her office withheld exculpatory evidence in a serious felony case. And she willingly participated in the calculated smear campaign against Brett Kavanaugh.

There were far too many other options on the table. While I might not have voted for any of these, I probably would have followed up on 2016 with a 2020 vote for the Libertarian candidate as a centrist Democrat would not have been demonstrably worse. Had Mr. Biden opted for a centrist as his VP, I could have voted for a third-party candidate as I doubt he will finish out his term in office.

Tulsi Gabbard was interesting; at the very least respectable. Deval Patrick has a history of working across the proverbial aisle. Andrew Yang brought a fresh perspective to the race. Even John Hickenlooper might have been able to pull off an interesting race for the Whitehouse. I would have considered voting for some of these candidates. At the very least I would have supported a third-party nominee as being closer to who I want in office without risking grave damage to our Republic.

I will be voting for a split ticket on Tuesday. There are a few Democrats running for local offices that I think can be trusted to execute the duties of those offices properly. There are a couple of Republicans that I simply cannot vote for based on their past actions.

And I will be voting for Donald Trump for President. Not because I think he is a stellar candidate. Not because he is fitting to stand amongst leaders like Washington, Adams, Jefferson, Reagan, Coolidge, Lincoln, Kennedy, and Truman.

However, letting the modern Democrats have any more power in the federal government is not a responsible option for the preservation of the Republic. This is strictly a defensive vote based on avoiding policies that would be more harmful to our country than Donald Trump's demonstrably deficient character.

Let them toss the socialists back into the World Workers Party, abandon their modern identitarian focus, re-tool their policies so that they serve all Americans, and talk to me again in 4 years.

[Modest edits 12/18/2020] [and on 5/20/2021] [and 10/2/2023]

Sunday, September 6, 2020

Review: Battle Born: Lapis Lazuli

Battle Born: Lapis Lazuli Battle Born: Lapis Lazuli by Maximilian Uriarte
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

If you thought that Max's The White Donkey was good, then get ready. This new book is a tour de force view of the Marine Corps, the war in Afghanistan, and how there isn't any situation that is defined by a single feature.

The artwork is gorgeous. Pages will go by with subtle and meaningful shifts in the image that heighten the tension of the story without a single word on any page.

The dialog is tight and accurate. The story covers many aspects of life in general as well as life in the Corps in particular.

This is the single best graphic work to be issued this year.

Do....no.....miss....it.

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Saturday, September 5, 2020

Review: Champion for Hire

Champion for Hire Champion for Hire by John Van Stry
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This book is a LitRPG adjacent presentation of a DND-ish adventure. Our brave hero has found his way from our Earth to a different dimension where swords rule and magic is pretty common.

Our hero discovers that he can utilize the disparate nature of those two realities to make money. Mostly by selling DND craft bows to LARPers in our world and modern bows made from composite materials to those living in the DND world.

He makes money and goes to a nearby town in the DND world where he proceeds to have sex.

He makes a lot more money, learns some fighting skills, and continues to have every hot female character that comes along fall on his lap.

He then becomes the champion of a god, leads an army to victory, and has even more sex with the hot queen.

While this book was a fun read, it was undermined by the fact that the lead character was a Gary Stu. Everything he did was correct. He always won. And he always got the girl. Girls actually as he ends up married to two different women from different parallel worlds. He also has another woman on the side. Everyone is OK with these arrangements.

There were a couple of twists towards the end that make this a book worth finishing once you start. But be prepared for a few occasions where you will have to walk blindly across the room as that is where your rolling eyes finally stopped.

I generally do not like LitRPG, but this was pretty good as it didn't really focus much on "leveling up" and just left character improvements to be revealed within the context of the story.

I picked up this book because the author is a fellow veteran and the elevator pitch made it worth taking a shot. I'm glad I read the book, but I'm unlikely to go any further in this series.


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Review: The Dawnhounds

The Dawnhounds The Dawnhounds by Sascha Stronach
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

This is a 2-star DNF review. That accurately represents my experience with this book.

I barely made it through the first few chapters. The opening chapter was an interesting hook. A crew was returning from exploring distant lands. Something they had brought back with them had infected some of the crew turning them into something....else. The hatches were locked and the uninfected crew was trying to make it home before thirst and starvation took them as well.

And then that crew died.

We moved on to a character that was a somewhat disgraced member of the police. She had been relegated to the night shift "for her own good". We learn little else of interest about this world after that. She has a sexual encounter and runs after a pickpocket.

The story just quickly devolved into something that was decorated with "fantasium" so that it seemed like a fantasy story but was really something more mundane.

The ghost of Dorothy Parker feasted on the rest of the book.

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Review: Scarlet Odyssey

Scarlet Odyssey Scarlet Odyssey by C.T. Rwizi
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I received this book free via an Amazon Prime program. I had not heard of this author before, but the elevator pitch was intriguing.

This is destined to be one of the best books published in 2020. It will be on my Hugo nomination list for the 2021 awards.

The story centers on Musalodi (known as Salo). He is the son of a tribal chief and the tribe's "witch".

Within this fictional world, magic is only performed by women. It is thought that men are unsuitable for that purpose and are instead fit only for combat, fighting, and hard physical labors such as tending cattle.

Yet Salo's mother has taught him some of the basics of magic. After her death, he learned even more on his own; much to his father's embarrassment. Salo is also mechanically gifted and repairs various equipment used by his tribe.

One source of power is found in crystals taken from the carcasses of various animals. Anyone who has placed Ark: Survival Evolved will recognize some of the mechanical creatures present in the story that live alongside more normal blood and bone creatures.

The use of these crystals to power equipment and larger magical workings lends this book an air of steampunk. I generally dislike steampunk novels. I loved this book as the method of using the crystals was made logical within the context of the story.

Of course, Salo is not the only person to pursue crafts nominally forbidden the character's gender. Ilapara is a young woman who was instructed by her father in the deep arts of physical combat. The two meet up with a mysterious wanderer who seems to be part machine and part human.

The entire story is told within a nominally "African" environment. All of the animals are analogous to animals found in Africa and perhaps south Asia.

There are various powers vying for a superior position in this world. Some are deities...or near deities. Others are powerful magic users. Yet others are just normal people using the available resources to advance the interests of their people.

This book is a tour-de-force initial outing from this new author. Go get this book. You will not be disappointed.

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Review: Debt of Honor

Debt of Honor Debt of Honor by Christopher G. Nuttall
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Christopher Nuttall is back with another MilSF oriented epic series. In this case, the Empire has barely survived an assault by a theocracy. The Empire's commitment to various alliances struck during the conflict are waning as aristocracy wants to get off of a war footing, lower taxes, and generally get back to making money.

A remnant of the theocracy finds a mysterious backer and their surviving fleet conducts hit-and-run actions in an attempt to snatch victory from the jaws of defeat. Who is their backer? What are their motives?

We also meet the admiral in charge of the Empire's fleet in the affected area of space. She adroitly deploys her resources to counter the insurgency.

The aristocracy plans on deposing the Emperor via impeachment and begins investigating for reasons to charge the Emperor. This sets up a crisis in government. Who will win the coming battle?

As always, Christopher nails all of the military aspects of the story. The interchange between Imperial forces and their allies is realistic. There is also a sub-plot involving Imperial citizenship and its importance to success within the Empire. Some characters that lack such citizenship opt to pursue success among the allies rather than to end up with middling careers that are surpassed by people that have citizenship but no other real qualifications for leadership within the Imperial navy.

The only criticism I have is that the entire political system seems unwieldy and unlikely. But otherwise, this is a nice start to what one hopes is a satisfying series.


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Review: Cold Iron

Cold Iron Cold Iron by Miles Cameron
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I've appreciated Miles Cameron's other series [The Traitor Son Cycle] a great deal and was hopeful that this would be equally special.

While this book was an entertaining read, it was ultimately forgettable. The fact that the book is clearly written as the first book in a series did it no favors.

If you want a fun sword and sorcery read, then give this a try. It was a lot of fun and Miles knows how to tell an entertaining tale.

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Review: The Light Brigade

The Light Brigade The Light Brigade by Kameron Hurley
My rating: 2 of 5 stars


I read this book as part of voting for the Hugo Awards this year. This book was in the last place on my ballot, three after "No Award". A 2.5-star DNF review reflects my experience with this book.

Dietz is a soldier in a future army. She enters the service in part to obtain citizenship; with all of the rights that go along with citizenship. There are three levels of existence; citizenship, legal resident, and just living. Where you sit in that pecking order determines the resources available to you.

The army she serves is fighting an enemy on Mars. But it is expensive to move soldiers into space and then to another planet. It's also hard to launch a surprise attack.

The scientists have discovered a way to convert soldiers into electromagnetic energy (i.e. light) so that the soldiers can be transmitted to the battlefield at the speed of light. There are a couple of problems with that theory presented in the book. The first is that being converted from matter to light and back tends to cause a sort of mental psychosis and physical deformities (think of the worst Star Trek transporter accident). Numerous trips increase the odds of something weird (and probably lethal) happening in transit. For Dietz, the problem is that she has stopped experiencing linear time. Her unit launches with a brief for one mission and she ends up on a different one; one she should remember, but doesn't, or one from the future that she also doesn't remember but is definitely out of linear order.

The second problem is that she never seems to land on Mars; the battlefields are always on Earth. The Martians that she and her unit fight are actually descendants of the humans that emigrated to Mars who have returned to restore the (nuclear?) wasteland of Canada. They are communists.

On the positive side, the book presents the interpersonal relationships of military service almost perfectly. Those characters and there relationships with one another were very believable. Coupled with the mystery of experiencing the non-linear passage of time, this book is a fine read as long as you aren't willing to take any of the rest of it seriously.

The author's lack of familiarity with actual military service is revealed early on. The characters take part in "marksmanship" training during boot camp that involves using bayonets on dummies. Marksmanship training involves shooting bullets. Bayonet training falls under "close combat training". There is also a boot camp sequence where the recruits go on an extended survival march after only 2 weeks worth of physical training and no survival or combat training.

The author uses the word "corps". In a military sense, the "s" is silent and describes a defined unit within the military. The author intends the word to be short for corporations; sounds like "corpse". That is a confusing use of the term within a MilSF context.

At one point, the author is describing "fire teams" and "squads". There are references to a commanding officer. What is never clear is how units break down (i.e. how many fire teams to a squad, squads in a platoon, etc.) nor is it ever clear how many soldiers report to a given CO. It is inferred that a platoon commander is a commanding officer. Nope.

One of the soldiers ends up being wounded. Another soldier opens up their own med-kit and begins rendering aid. It is the standard doctrine that you always, always, always use the wounded soldier's med-kit before touching your own.

One character, Major General Stakely, is referred to as Major Stakely. Nope. That should be either "General Stakely" or "Major General Stakely". Otherwise, you are demoting the character by four levels.

There are more examples, but the point is made. The author's familiarity with military structures and traditions is nearly non-existent.

[Please permit a brief pause. I hate the idea of "sensitivity readers". I think authors should be free to explore cultures and experiences that may beyond their remit. I do think that authors should pursue sufficient information to lend accuracy to their work. "Accuracy readers" are a great idea as they help the author understand where they are bending reality and where they are breaking reality. Sometimes a purposeful breaking of reality is justified. This book could have used an accuracy reader so that the author would know what they were breaking.]

This book seems to be an attempt at a conversation with Robert Heinlein and his book Starship Troopers, among others. It is woefully inadequate for that task.

In Heinlein's books, the people leaving earth are always described as seeking relief from an ever intrusive amount of government. They always use their newfound freedom to innovate in ways that the legally sclerotic Earth governments always regulated against. In Heinlein's works, success was always presented as the first fruit of individual liberty.

This has been the story of humanity throughout recorded history. Heinlein wasn't making something up. He was echoing human experience.

In contrast, the author has the Communists leaving earth for Mars where they develop the technology needed to restore a North American continent that has been ravaged by war. I believe nuclear weapons are implied, but the devastation is on that scale nonetheless.

The problem is that human history relative to Communism documents that it causes oppression and poverty. It slows technological advancements and stifles human knowledge. That which the party disapproves is simply a topic that will never be explored regardless of the potential benefits. That which the party approves is enacted regardless of the demonstrable harm.

Any author suggesting that Communism has (finally!) worked is automatically obligated to demonstrate how it worked. In light of the unbroken series of failures that have led to mass poverty (at the very least) and mass graves (over 100,000,000 killed), the suggestion that Communism is a functioning political and economic model places a heavy burden on the author to demonstrate how it works. Within the context of the first 2/3s of the book, this is just hand-waved away. How an intellectually backward political and economic system of governance with a demonstrable history of creating poverty and oppression is able to develop a new technology that is unavailable on Earth stretches the suspension of disbelief well beyond the breaking point.

There is also the sub-text of a limited set of corporations running the world. Anyone familiar with the 1970s vintage movie "Rollerball" will have already experienced a far more effective treatment of that unlikely outcome. Within the course of human histories, corporate monopolies rarely last without a government mandate.

This is a decent book if you aren't going to think about the themes and the details too much. The characters are quite engaging. The plot involving a non-linear procession of time is intriguing.

But after reading ~2/3s of the book, I knew that it was going well below No Award on my Hugo ballot. I knew that the author was just splashing militarium (well-crafted militarium, but a splashing of it nonetheless) around without really understanding anything about military training and operations. And I knew that the political/economic theme was going to be a hot mess. This was a DNF read for me.

Reading this book put me in the mind of a quote by author Jim Butcher: "Never preach harder than you can entertain." When the sub-text supersedes the text, an author has shifted from story-telling to preaching. Butcher's aphorism applies in spades.

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Review: The City in the Middle of the Night

The City in the Middle of the Night The City in the Middle of the Night by Charlie Jane Anders
My rating: 3 of 5 stars


I read this book as part of voting for the Hugo Awards this year. This book was in sixth place on my ballot; two below "No Award". A 3-star review reflects my experience with this book. Charlie's past success is the only reason this book didn't go into the DNF pile. I had hoped that the ending would redeem the work and justify the time invested. Nope.

Sophie and Bianca are college students studying to be something influential in the future. They live in a city that tightly controls all facets of society. So they are lucky to have their privileged positions. Bianca steals some money for food that she doesn't really need. The police randomly detain them. Sophie thinks she is saving Bianca by taking the money which the police soon discover. Sophie is taken outside of the city and forced her to climb a hill (more like a small mountain) into the dark side of the planet.

The planet is tidally locked with the sun! One side of the planet always faces the sun and the other side exists in perpetual darkness. The hot side is hot. The cold side is very cold.

The humans arrived on this planet via a generation ship from Earth. As the story unfolds, we learn there is a sentient, intelligent species that is native to the planet. The humans are invaders.

This book continues to cause me so many problems. Charlie Jane Anders is a wonderfully gifted author. Charlie's writing is thought-provoking in unusual ways.

This book would have been above No Award if it didn't have so many plot holes. Where to start.

The planet is tidally locked. The hot side is hot enough to cause wood to auto-ignite

Humanity is largely concentrated in two cities/regions. There is a narrow band of the planet that is suitable for human habitation that exists about the terminator between "day" and "night". Assuming that this planet is reasonably Earth-like (i.e. similar size, mass, etc.) that stationary terminator is bound to be roughly 35 to 40 miles wide. The moving terminator on Earth is roughly 37 miles wide.

When the police were forcing Sophie over that hill, they were forcing her into an area of an eternal and bitterly cold night. During her venture into this frigid zone, she meets one of the planet's natives and communicates with them. Eventually, the native gets her back to the city where she slips inside the wall and hides.

She reconnects with Bianca. Then end up traveling to the other city and learn about a different, far less regimented lifestyle.

The comparison between the two cities reads to me as comparing your average socialist state (complete with currency manipulations and other tricks) and near-total anarchy. That general theme was handled better in Clockwork Angels by Kevin J. Anderson and Neil Peart several years ago.

Eventually, the two join with some activists in the anarchist city and they go back to the authoritarian city to take over and "change things". Just what every young college student is determined to do. Sophie gets separated from the group during the trip home and ends up going to the native city that is under the icy nighttime surface. She learns about how humans have been unknowingly screwing with the native environment. She learns a bit more about the humans that first settled on the planet. The natives end up doing surgery on Sophie to change her into something that is not human and not wholly native.

As a past Hugo winner, Charlie Jane Anders has a record of superior writing performance. Based on that past work, I felt that I should read this book in full to give it (and Charlie) the fullest opportunity. The characters were engaging. There were several themes that were quite thought-provoking.

But there were so many questions.

Why did the humans elect to come to this planet? They had built a generation ship so they could have elected for another, more hospitable planet.

Within the narrative of the story, different cities...and thus different ethnicities...contribute different parts to the design of the generation ship. As a result, one group of citizens is able to use their knowledge/resources to gain power over the rest of the ship. A war breaks out. While the intergroup dynamics are understandable, the origin for those dynamics, the division of labor/design based on region/ethnicity, doesn't make much sense.

Given the extreme temperature of the side of the planet facing the sun (the autoignition temperature of wood is roughly 700°F), I find it difficult to believe that they had landing craft capable of sustaining life from the generation ship down to the surface of the planet. That would be comparable to temperatures on either Mercury or Venus. The extreme temperature differential should cause nearly non-stop storms raging across the terminator zone.

The humans of this world are inhuman. It is suggested that all of the resources that one could imagine are located on or under the daytime side of the planet. Yet the humans have done nothing to pursue those resources in an attempt to build a civilization. They just exist on the scavaged remains of the generation ship until their ability to get back to the generation ship ends. This inaction by humanity is inhuman.

Anyone with some basic familiarity with thermodynamics will know that having such a high and constant temperature differential creates a source of nearly limitless, cheap power. Yet the humans do nothing to exploit that potential. Crops are raised on contraptions that slowly rotate like giant Ferris wheels so that the crops can all get sun and shade. Humans physically power that motion.

The native city/culture reads like a prototypical utopian socialist state. While the other city read as the predictable result of a human socialist state, the native city is an echo of the tired cliche that "real socialism hasn't been tried". People talk. Things happen. There are puppet shows in theaters. Everyone communicates with everyone else. Things just get done based on quasi-mystical consensus. Individualism is suppressed.

There is even some sort of Ancestor ghost-god that everyone consults for guidance. It is suggested that the ghost-god exists somewhere between a mass illusion, to collective memory, to actual existence. The only progress that occurs is when a couple of natives isolate themselves from the larger group to develop new devices. This is the culture that strips Sophie of her humanity so that she can join their collective.

The close of the book is a dream sequence where the altered Sophie takes some sort of astral projection dream trip out into space to recall the time when humans first arrived. It is stated that this vision doesn't reflect any actual lived experience of the natives. I found it to be a cheap gimmick.

Throughout the book, there are various suggestions that some of our modern problems are in play. Greed, sexism, racism, and a host of other intersectional causes appear and then quickly disappear from consideration. There never is a single flaw nor a single solution beyond the questioning of basic human existence. This was particularly disappointing as Charlie has done a fantastic job in the past of illustrating multiple flaws/issues in a way that lends clarity to the human condition.

Between the troublesome plot points and the general thematic issues, I simply did not find this to be a compelling work worthy of higher recognition. This book was the greatest disappointment out of six nominees. I thought there might be some discussion of challenges associated with space travel, or on developing new worlds, or general engineering obstacles. All of that ended up being the potted plants in a tableau designed to question the value of human existence.

Reading this book put me in the mind of a quote by author Jim Butcher: "Never preach harder than you can entertain." When the sub-text supersedes the text, an author has shifted from story-telling to preaching. Butcher's aphorism applies.

[A brief coda. I was so enthused by Charlie's prior Hugo winning book that I was genuinely looking forward to reading this year's nominated work. This was like having eaten fine food at a Michelin starred restaurant and being served a Big Mac and fries on a subsequent visit. I originally had this book one slot higher on my ballot until I got done writing this lengthy post.]

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Review: The Ten Thousand Doors of January

The Ten Thousand Doors of January The Ten Thousand Doors of January by Alix E. Harrow
My rating: 4 of 5 stars


I read this book as part of voting for the Hugo Awards this year. This book was in fifth place on my ballot after "No Award". A 4-star review reflects my experience with this book.

This is the tale of a young January Scaller. Born into our Earth. Born into our Universe. Born into a universe of multi-verses; each accessible through doors that exist at the point where the distance between two universes is narrowed. People can travel between universes just be walking through a door.

This is the tale of January's father, who traveled through a door as a boy to meet her mother. This is the tale of January's mother; an adventurist spirit who upon meeting that young boy decides to find her way to him through another such door. Spoiler - she finds a way through via a different door, and thus we have January.

The premise of the book was so intriguing that I was looking forward to reading it. I figured there would be lots of doors and lots of worlds to explore. Nope. I think you can count the interdimensional doors that characters actually visit within the story on one hand. You might need one or two other fingers. There are a few more that are mentioned "off-screen". Most of the exploration, such as it is, occurs here in our world.

The antagonist of the book leads a small group of explorers who are systematically destroying the doors. They are also strategically investing in companies that exploit natural resources around the world. The anti-colonialism message is unmistakable.

The conceit of the book is that the exchange of people from different universes that the doors provide actually fosters human progress. Therefore the doors should remain open. The antagonist is shutting them down to shut down progress and consolidate power on this Earth.

There is a strong element of identity politics within the book. All of the white people, especially the men, are remarkably intolerant and greedy. All of the non-white people are tolerant and nice. This arrangement has not yet been seen on our Earth. I can't speak to other multi-verses.

While I enjoyed this book, it contains a single, fundamental flaw. The antagonist came through such a door himself. As he is presented as a source of intolerance and greed, then intolerance and greed must exist in other multi-verses. If the source of trouble on our Earth came through an interdimensional door, then perhaps it is useful to know who/what is coming through those doors to ensure that the harmful stuff doesn't make it through?

The logical inconsistency creates a plot hole that makes this work one that I would not consider for one of the most significant genre awards.

Reading this book put me in the mind of a quote by author Jim Butcher: "Never preach harder than you can entertain." When the sub-text supersedes the text, an author has shifted from story-telling to preaching. Butcher's aphorism applies here.

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Review: A Memory Called Empire

A Memory Called Empire A Memory Called Empire by Arkady Martine
My rating: 4 of 5 stars


I read this book as part of voting for the Hugo Awards this year. This book was in third place on my ballot. A 4-star review reflects my experience with this book.

A young Mahit Dzmare has been named as Ambassador to the Empire. Her nation/region uses memory implants to perpetuate communal knowledge and experience. Ordinarily, after being named Ambassador, she would have been implanted with the memories of the prior Ambassador.

He happens to be dead under troubling circumstances and the oldest copy of his memories is nine years out of date. The outdated copy that she does receive is flawed in some way. It eventually stops working altogether.

Mahit ends up searching for answers in a classic whodunnit style. The answers she finds may determine if the Empire will leave her little nation's region of space alone. They may also chart the future course of the Empire.

A modest nit to pick is that the Empire provides Mahit with a translator/facilitator that is a citizen of the Empire. The translator routinely puts Mahit's needs/objectives ahead of where any potential loyalty to the Empire. There are a couple of other characters that are citizens of the Empire and employed by the empire that similarly put Mahit's interests ahead of the Empire. That arrangement seems unlikely.

I found the book to be generally well written with engaging characters. While it was not terribly exciting to me, I can see where others might find this work to be an example of superior performance within the genre.

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Review: Gideon the Ninth

Gideon the Ninth Gideon the Ninth by Tamsyn Muir
My rating: 4 of 5 stars


I read this book as part of voting for the Hugo Awards this year. This book was in second place on my ballot. A 4.5-star review reflects my experience with this book.

Gideon is of the Ninth House. She feels that the Ninth House has been oppressing her for her entire life. She is stuck living in a place and among people that reject her on a regular basis.

Harrow is the heir to the Ninth House. She has the ability to transmute the smallest bit of bone into a full-scale skeleton that will act (and fight) on her behalf. The Ninth House in general is a goth dream world with skeleton slave workers and everyone mincing about as though they will be in their grave within the next week. Harrow is called to the Emperor's House to train to become something more. She needs a knight at her side, and Gideon is all the Ninth has to offer. So they set off to unravel a series of mysteries and work towards the objective of becoming something more.

This book contains all of the hallmark attributes of good grimdark fiction. Morally compromised characters that inspire the reader to not really support any of them. At least not until it becomes clear at the end that there are worse options. Gideon is also imbued with a tremendous sense of wit.

At the heart of the book are themes of acceptance; acceptance by others and acceptance of oneself. There are times when the world denies you enough knowledge to be self-aware. How do your opinions of yourself and the world change once those obstacles fall away?

This was a fun romp with a thoroughly inventive bit of world-building. Who would have matched bone magic with rocketships and galactic armies? Every page was a delight. My biggest complaint is that it is written to be the first book in a series. The story is not reasonably well contained within this single tome.

Author Peter V. Brett has expressed his desire to write the first book in a series as a well-contained story that will allow the reader to walk away from the series satisfied with that single volume. His hope is that it will also be good enough to entice the reader back for more. While this book is a broadly satisfying read, it falls short of that ideal.

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Review: Middlegame

Middlegame Middlegame by Seanan McGuire
My rating: 5 of 5 stars


I read this book as part of voting for the Hugo Awards this year. Middlegame was at the top of my ballot. A 5-star review reflects my experience with this book.

A set of twins, brother and sister named Roger and Dodger, are bred to achieve ultimate power over reality. The man, James Reed, that bred them maintains a laboratory of Lovecraftian work where researchers continue lesser experiments. Reed is himself the product of a dark experiment by another scientist, Asphodel Baker, whose work was rejected by the academy for the crime of it having been created by a woman. Roger and Dodger were bred to be tools for someone else. Can they break free of that control and work on their own behalf?

There are lots of delicious layers to this book. There are some passages dealing with sexism in science. There are also some themes involving long term planning. Reed was created by Asphodel to execute her research on the world. The creation of Reed involves the death of Asphodel. Before her death, Asphodel seeds the global human consciousness with fictional literature that illustrates the theories of her scientific research. Which characters are playing the longest game of all?

Themes involving individuals complementing one another are present as well. Rodger and Dodger have different perspectives on the world; he lives in words while she lives in numbers and equations. Only together do they possess the potential to control the definitions of reality.

This book is a literary rollercoaster ride. Lots of ups and downs. There are many sections where there is a graceful pause just before the bottom drops out and you fall in terror. It skips back and forth between fantasy and horror with the lightness of a ballerina.

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Friday, August 21, 2020

Review: Air Awakens



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it was ok
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Received as a free book via an Amazon Prime offer.

This is a 2-star review. My experience was closer to 2.5 stars.

The book summary was incredibly deceptive. It presents a young woman who is faced with the choice between her developing magical skills and continuing to work in a library. Instead of a story about magic with some other features tossed in, we end up getting a romance novel that is sprinkled with a bit of magic here and there.

The early bits of the book are terribly dry with drawn-out sections of exposition that lay the groundwork for the magic system. That information does very little to move the narrative along.

The characters are mostly cardboard cut-outs early in the book with some modest development later on.

All of the men in the story are taken with our protagonist. She unknowingly (and accountable  unaccountably) attracts the attention of every eligible bachelor that comes across her path. (a modest exaggeration, but not far off the mark)

At one point, she can only evaluate her own self-worth based on the opinion of one of the princes. Hardly a story of individual worth and empowerment.

There is a trial sequence that is laughable. The "prosecutor" is allowed to voice accusatory flights of fancy that are ephemerally connected to the brief testimony provided by the witnesses.

Our protagonist is presented as possessing the many habits of the elite members of society. In particular, she is presented as being "common", but she speaks like an elite. We get to hear/read a real commoner speak during the trial. The dissonance between the two despite both coming from the same common pool is large.

This is a great book for a pre-teen interested in a "she's so pretty, Cinderella-esque" story. I wouldn't recommend it to anyone else.

Saturday, August 15, 2020

Review: The Rules of Supervillainy

The Rules of Supervillainy (The Supervillainy Saga Book 1)The Rules of Supervillainy by C.T. PhippsMy rating: 3 of 5 stars

The general concept of the book is that supervillains and superheroes exist everywhere. Our protagonist styles himself as a supervillain.....named Mercilous....who purposefully only kills bad people; i.e. other supervillains. Ironic, right?

The book is written as something of a parody and something of an homage to comics/graphic novel based superheroes. It tries to be funny and occasionally succeeds. There are major doses of irony and sarcasm sprinkled throughout.

However, the constant pop-culture references detract from the world-building and the general storyline. Given the number of references to real-world events/people/culture, the lack of any reference to bigger named Marvel/DC Comics names is a bit odd.

It really took until the back half of the book before I was engaged enough to want to finish it. It was a debate until that point as to whether this was going in the DNF pile. The book was competently written with minor proof-reading/editing issues.

Thursday, August 13, 2020

Review: The Girl and the Stars

The Girl and the Stars The Girl and the Stars by Mark Lawrence
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3-star review. My experience was closer to 3.5 stars.

This book is set in Mark Lawrence's "Book of the Ancestor" series. It features a young woman, Yaz, who lives in one of several tribes that wander the nearly ice-covered world of Abeth. There was another people living on Abeth a long, long time ago. Technology allowed them to "improve" themselves and they left Abeth. New people came to Abeth to live among the ruins and build a new civilization. Since their arrival, the star that heated the world slowly died; hence the ice encroaching from the poles towards the equator of the world.

The descendants of that second group now live semi-primitive lives among the technology left behind by the first group of people. That technology seems a bit like "magic" to the remnant that is left in the ruins and/or wandering the ice.

Among the second group of people, there are four sub-groups that occasionally show up that seem to exhibit some sort of enhanced abilities. Yaz is one of those four.

Among the people living on the ice, people exhibiting behaviors from those sub-groups are removed from the general population. Specifically, they are tossed down a deep hole in the ice. Those that survive the drop do....other things.

Yaz is identified as being from the one useful sub-group and is set aside by the "priests". Her brother is identified as being from one of the other three and is dropped through the hole in the ice. Yaz, who loves her brother, dives in after him.

That is the setup and based on my reading of the "Book of the Ancestor" series, this book should be another tremendous adventure.

It fell short for a couple of reasons. The first is that we spend a lot of time in Yaz's head while she feels things. The second reason is that Yaz is inexplicably determined to save everyone. She works to save people that she's known her entire life, those she has barely met, and people that she never really met.

Yaz essentially determined that "it's all so unfair" and proceeds from there. Her interactions with others are limited to either trying to save people or emoting about the need to save people. By the end, her efforts seemed to be more self-serving than self-sacrifice.

The end of the book had some interesting plot twists. If this book connects with another reader early on, then they should stay to the end.

It didn't connect with me and I would have DNF'd this book if I had not read (6) other fantastic books written by Mark Lawrence over the last year. I'm unlikely to read the next book in this series.

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Friday, July 17, 2020

Hugo Voting - 2020

2020 Hugo Awards - Best Novel

That time of the year has come once again.  It is time to vote for the Hugo Awards.  While I usually cover at least three award categories each year, I'm only going to participate in one this year.

Time has been at a premium.  And quite frankly I've experienced most of the fan-casting nominees already.  They aren't that great.  The novels were a mixed bag.  My ranking and a brief version of my reasoning follow.  I've added some other books at the end that would have provided stout competition to those that I placed above No Award.

This year was a pleasant change of pace from recent years.  There was one piece of decent MilSF, there was some horror, there was some grimdark, there was some humor, there was more fun.  Even the book that I didn't finish was pretty good.  If I were reading for pleasure, I would have gladly finished the book regardless of the flaws.  All of the works were quite engaging even if a few of them were not really Hugo Award-worthy material.

I've tried to keep the spoilers down to a minimum, but they do exist.

Middlegame, by Seanan McGuire (Tor.com Publishing)

A set of twins, brother and sister named Roger and Dodger, are bred to achieve ultimate power over reality.  The man, James Reed, that bred them maintains a laboratory of Lovecraftian work where researchers continue lesser experiments.  Reed is himself the product of a dark experiment by another scientist, Asphodel Baker, whose work was rejected by the academy for the crime of it having been created by a woman.  Roger and Dodger were bred to be tools for someone else.  Can they break free of that control and work on their own behalf?

There are lots of delicious layers to this book.  There are some passages dealing with sexism in science.  There are also some themes involving long term planning.  Reed was created by Asphodel to execute her research on the world.  The creation of Reed involves the death of Asphodel.  Before her death, Asphodel seeds the global human consciousness with fictional literature that illustrates the theories of her scientific research.  Which characters are playing the longest game of all?

Themes involving individuals complementing one another are present as well.  Rodger and Dodger have different perspectives on the world; he lives in words while she lives in numbers and equations.  Only together do they possess the potential to control the definitions of reality.

This book is a literary rollercoaster ride.  Lots of ups and downs.  There are many sections where there is a graceful pause just before the bottom drops out and you fall in terror.  It skips back and forth between fantasy and horror with the lightness of a ballerina.

Gideon the Ninth, by Tamsyn Muir (Tor.com Publishing)

Gideon is of the Ninth House.  She feels that the Ninth House has been oppressing her for her entire life.  She is stuck living in a place and among people that reject her on a regular basis.

Harrow is the heir to the Ninth House.  She has the ability to transmute the smallest bit of bone into a full-scale skeleton that will act (and fight) on her behalf.  The Ninth House in general is a goth dream world with skeleton slave workers and everyone mincing about as though they will be in their grave within the next week.  Harrow is called to the Emperor's House to train to become something more.  She needs a knight at her side, and Gideon is all the Ninth has to offer.  So they set off to unravel a series of mysteries and work towards the objective of becoming something more.

This book contains all of the hallmark attributes of good grimdark fiction.  Morally compromised characters that inspire the reader to not really support any of them.  At least not until it becomes clear at the end that there are worse options.  Gideon is also imbued with a tremendous sense of wit.

At the heart of the book are themes of acceptance; acceptance by others and acceptance of oneself.  There are times when the world denies you enough knowledge to be self-aware.  How do your opinions of yourself and the world change once those obstacles fall away?

This was a fun romp with a thoroughly inventive bit of world-building.  Who would have matched bone magic with rocketships and galactic armies?  Every page was a delight.  My biggest complaint is that it is written to be the first book in a series.  The story is not reasonably well contained within this single tome.

Author Peter V. Brett has expressed his desire to write the first book in a series as a well-contained story that will allow the reader to walk away from the series satisfied with that single volume.  His hope is that it will also be good enough to entice the reader back for more.  While this book is a broadly satisfying read, it falls short of that ideal.

A Memory Called Empire, by Arkady Martine (Tor; Tor UK)

A young Mahit Dzmare has been named as Ambassador to the Empire.  Her nation/region uses memory implants to perpetuate communal knowledge and experience.  Ordinarily, after being named Ambassador, she would have been implanted with the memories of the prior Ambassador.

He happens to be dead under troubling circumstances and the oldest copy of his memories is nine years out of date.  The outdated copy that she does receive is flawed in some way.  It eventually stops working altogether.

Mahit ends up searching for answers in a classic whodunnit style.  The answers she finds may determine if the Empire will leave her little nation's region of space alone.  They may also chart the future course of the Empire.

A modest nit to pick is that the Empire provides Mahit with a translator/facilitator that is a citizen of the Empire.   The translator routinely puts Mahit's needs/objectives ahead of where any potential loyalty to the Empire.  There are a couple other characters that are citizens of the Empire and employed by the empire that similarly put Mahit's interests ahead of the Empire.  That arrangement seems unlikely.

I found the book to be generally well written with engaging characters.  While it was not terribly exciting to me, I can see where others might find this work to be an example of superior performance within the genre.

No Award

The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow (Redhook; Orbit UK)

This is the tale of a young January Scaller.  Born into our Earth.  Born into our Universe.  Born into a universe of multi-verses; each accessible through doors that exist at the point where the distance between two universes is narrowed.  People can travel between universes just be walking through a door.

This is the tale of January's father, who traveled through a door as a boy to meet her mother.  This is the tale of January's mother; an adventurist spirit who upon meeting that young boy decides to find her way to him through another such door.  Spoiler - she finds a way through via a different door, and thus we have January.

The premise of the book was so intriguing that I was looking forward to reading it.  I figured there would be lots of doors and lots of worlds to explore.  Nope.  I think you can count the interdimensional doors that characters actually visit within the story on one hand.  You might need one or two other fingers.  There are a few more that are mentioned "off-screen".  Most of the exploration, such as it is, occurs here in our world.

The antagonist of the book leads a small group of explorers who are systematically destroying the doors.  They are also strategically investing in companies that exploit natural resources around the world.  The anti-colonialism message is unmistakable.

The conceit of the book is that the exchange of people from different universes that the doors provide actually fosters human progress.  Therefore the doors should remain open.  The antagonist is shutting them down to shut down progress and consolidate power on this Earth.

There is a strong element of identity politics within the book.  All of the white people, especially the men, are remarkably intolerant and greedy.  All of the non-white people are tolerant and nice.  This arrangement has not yet been seen on our Earth.  I can't speak to other multi-verses.

While I enjoyed this book, it contains a single, fundamental flaw.  The antagonist came through such a door himself.  As he is presented as a source of intolerance and greed, then intolerance and greed must exist in other multi-verses.  If the source of trouble on our Earth came through an interdimensional door, then perhaps it is useful to know who/what is coming through those doors to ensure that the harmful stuff doesn't make it through?

The logical inconsistency creates a plot hole that makes this work one that I would not consider for one of the most significant genre awards.

The City in the Middle of the Night, by Charlie Jane Anders (Tor; Titan)

Sophie and Bianca are college students studying to be something influential in the future.  They live in a city that tightly controls all facets of society.  So they are lucky to have their privileged positions.  Bianca steals some money for food that she doesn't really need.  The police randomly detain them.  Sophie thinks she is saving Bianca by taking the money which the police soon discover.  Sophie is taken outside of the city and forced her to climb a hill (more like a small mountain) into the dark side of the planet.

The planet is tidally locked with the sun!  One side of the planet always faces the sun and the other side exists in perpetual darkness.  The hot side is hot.  The cold side is very cold.

The humans arrived on this planet via a generation ship from Earth.  As the story unfolds, we learn there is a sentient, intelligent species that is native to the planet.  The humans are invaders.

This book continues to cause me so many problems.  Charlie Jane Anders is a wonderfully gifted author.  Charlie's writing is thought-provoking in unusual ways.

This book would have been above No Award if it didn't have so many plot holes.  Where to start.

The planet is tidally locked.  The hot side is hot enough to cause wood to auto-ignite

Humanity is largely concentrated in two cities/regions.  There is a narrow band of the planet that is suitable for human habitation that exists about the terminator between "day" and "night".  Assuming that this planet is reasonably Earth-like (i.e. similar size, mass, etc.) that stationary terminator is bound to be roughly 35 to 40 miles wide.  The moving terminator on Earth is roughly 37 miles wide.

When the police were forcing Sophie over that hill, they were forcing her into an area of eternal and bitterly cold night.  During her venture into this frigid zone, she meets one of the planet's natives and communicates with them.  Eventually, the native gets her back to the city where she slips inside the wall and hides.

She reconnects with Bianca.  Then end up traveling to the other city and learn about a different, far less regimented lifestyle.

The comparison between the two cities reads to me as comparing your average socialist state (complete with currency manipulations and other tricks) and near-total anarchy.  That general theme was handled better in Clockwork Angels by Kevin J. Anderson and Neil Peart several years ago.

Eventually, the two join with some activists in the anarchist city and they go back to the authoritarian city to take over and "change things".  Just what every young college student is determined to do.  Sophie gets separated from the group during the trip home and ends up going to the native city that is under the icy nighttime surface.  She learns about how humans have been unknowingly screwing with the native environment.  She learns a bit more about the humans that first settled on the planet.  The natives end up doing surgery on Sophie to change her into something that is not human and not wholly native.

As a past Hugo winner, Charlie Jane Anders has a record of superior writing performance.  Based on that past work, I felt that I should read this book in full to give it (and Charlie) the fullest opportunity.  The characters were engaging.  There were several themes that were quite thought-provoking.

But there were so many questions.

Why did the humans elect to come to this planet?  They had built a generation ship so they could have elected for another, more hospitable planet.

Within the narrative of the story, different cities...and thus different ethnicities...contribute different parts to the design of the generation ship.  As a result, one group of citizens is able to use their knowledge/resources to gain power over the rest of the ship.  A war breaks out.  While the intergroup dynamics are understandable, the origin for those dynamics, the division of labor/design based on region/ethnicity, doesn't make much sense.

Given the extreme temperature of the side of the planet facing the sun (the autoignition temperature of wood is roughly 700°F), I find it difficult to believe that they had landing craft capable of sustaining life from the generation ship down to the surface of the planet.  That would be comparable to temperatures on either Mercury or Venus.  The extreme temperature differential should cause nearly non-stop storms raging across the terminator zone.

The humans of this world are inhuman.  It is suggested that all of the resources that one could imagine are located on or under the daytime side of the planet.  Yet the humans have done nothing to pursue those resources in an attempt to build a civilization.  They just exist on the scavaged remains of the generation ship until their ability to get back to the generation ship ends.  This inaction by humanity is inhuman.

Anyone with some basic familiarity with thermodynamics will know that having such a high and constant temperature differential creates a source of nearly limitless, cheap power.  Yet the humans do nothing to exploit that potential.  Crops are raised on contraptions that slowly rotate like giant Ferris wheels so that the crops can all get sun and shade.  Humans physically power that motion.

The native city/culture reads like a prototypical utopian socialist state.  While the other city read as the predictable result of a human socialist state, the native city is an echo of the tired cliche that "real socialism hasn't been tried".  People talk.  Things happen.  There are puppet shows in theaters.  Everyone communicates with everyone else.  Things just get done based on quasi-mystical consensus.  Individualism is suppressed. 

There is even some sort of Ancestor ghost-god that everyone consults for guidance.  It is suggested that the ghost-god exists somewhere between a mass illusion, to collective memory, to actual existence.  The only progress that occurs is when a couple of natives isolate themselves from the larger group to develop new devices.  This is the culture that strips Sophie of her humanity so that she can join their collective.

The close of the book is a dream sequence where the altered Sophie takes some sort of astral projection dream trip out into space to recall the time when humans first arrived.  It is stated that this vision doesn't reflect any actual lived experience of the natives.  I found it to be a cheap gimmick.

Throughout the book, there are various suggestions that some of our modern problems are in play.  Greed, sexism, racism, and a host of other intersectional causes appear and then quickly disappear from consideration.  There never is a single flaw nor a single solution beyond the questioning of basic human existence.  This was particularly disappointing as Charlie has done a fantastic job in the past of illustrating multiple flaws/issues in a way that lends clarity to the human condition.

Between the troublesome plot points and the general thematic issues, I simply did not find this to be a compelling work worthy of higher recognition.  This book was the greatest disappointment out of six nominees.  I thought there might be some discussion of challenges associated with space travel, or on developing new worlds, or general engineering obstacles.  All of that ended up being the potted plants in a tableau designed to question the value of human existence.

[A brief coda.  I was so enthused by Charlie's prior Hugo winning book that I was genuinely looking forward to reading this year's nominated work.  This was like having eaten fine food at a Michelin starred restaurant and being served a Big Mac and fries on a subsequent visit.  I originally had this book one slot higher on my ballot until I got done writing this lengthy post.]

The Light Brigade, by Kameron Hurley (Saga; Angry Robot UK)

Dietz is a soldier in a future army.  She enters the service in part to obtain citizenship; with all of the rights that go along with citizenship.  There are three levels of existence; citizenship, legal resident, and just living.  Where you sit in that pecking order determines the resources available to you.

The army she serves is fighting an enemy on Mars.  But it is expensive to move soldiers into space and then to another planet.  It's also hard to launch a surprise attack.

The scientists have discovered a way to convert soldiers into electromagnetic energy (i.e. light) so that the soldiers can be transmitted to the battlefield at the speed of light.  There are a couple of problems with that theory presented in the book.  The first is that being converted from matter to light and back tends to cause a sort of mental psychosis and physical deformities (think of the worst Star Trek transporter accident).  Numerous trips increase the odds of something weird (and probably lethal) happening in transit.  For Dietz, the problem is that she has stopped experiencing linear time.  Her unit launches with a brief for one mission and she ends up on a different one; one she should remember, but doesn't, or one from the future that she also doesn't remember but is definitely out of linear order.

The second problem is that she never seems to land on Mars; the battlefields are always on Earth.  The Martians that she and her unit fight are actually descendants of the humans that emigrated to Mars who have returned to restore the (nuclear?) wasteland of Canada.  They are communists.

On the positive side, the book presents the interpersonal relationships of military service almost perfectly.  Those characters and there relationships with one another were very believable.  Coupled with the mystery of experiencing the non-linear passage of time, this book is a fine read as long as you aren't willing to take any of the rest of it seriously.

The author's lack of familiarity with actual military service is revealed early on.  The characters take part in "marksmanship" training during boot camp that involves using bayonets on dummies.  Marksmanship training involves shooting bullets.  Bayonet training falls under "close combat training".  There is also a boot camp sequence where the recruits go on an extended survival march after only 2 weeks worth of physical training and no survival or combat training.

The author uses the word "corps".  In a military sense, the "s" is silent and describes a defined unit within the military.  The author intends the word to be short for corporations; sounds like "corpse".  That is a confusing use of the term within a MilSF context.

At one point, the author is describing "fire teams" and "squads".  There are references to a commanding officer.  What is never clear is how units break down (i.e. how many fire teams to a squad, squads in a platoon, etc.) nor is it ever clear how many soldiers report to a given CO.  It is inferred that a platoon commander is a commanding officer.  Nope.

One of the soldiers ends up being wounded.  Another soldier opens up their own med-kit and begins rendering aid.  It is the standard doctrine that you always, always, always use the wounded soldier's med-kit before touching your own.

One character, Major General Stakely, is referred to as Major Stakely.  Nope.  That should be either "General Stakely" or "Major General Stakely".  Otherwise, you are demoting the character by four levels.

There are more examples, but the point is made.  The author's familiarity with military structures and traditions is nearly non-existent.

[Please permit a brief pause.  I hate the idea of "sensitivity readers".  I think authors should be free to explore cultures and experiences that may beyond their remit.  I do think that authors should pursue sufficient information to lend accuracy to their work.  "Accuracy readers" are a great idea as they help the author understand where they are bending reality and where they are breaking reality.  Sometimes a purposeful breaking of reality is justified.  This book could have used an accuracy reader so that the author would know what they were breaking.]

This book seems to be an attempt at a conversation with Robert Heinlein and his book Starship Troopers, among others.  It is woefully inadequate for that task.

In Heinlein's books, the people leaving earth are always described as seeking relief from an ever intrusive amount of government.  They always use their newfound freedom to innovate in ways that the legally sclerotic Earth governments always regulated against.  In Heinlein's works, success was always presented as the first fruit of individual liberty.

This has been the story of humanity throughout recorded history.  Heinlein wasn't making something up.  He was echoing human experience.

In contrast, the author has the Communists leaving earth for Mars where they develop the technology needed to restore a North American continent that has been ravaged by war.  I believe nuclear weapons are implied, but the devastation is on that scale nonetheless.

The problem is that human history relative to Communism documents that it causes oppression and poverty.  It slows technological advancements and stifles human knowledge.  That which the party disapproves is simply a topic that will never be explored regardless of the potential benefits.  That which the party approves is enacted regardless of the demonstrable harm.

Any author suggesting that Communism has (finally!) worked is automatically obligated to demonstrate how it worked.  In light of the unbroken series of failures that have led to mass poverty (at the very least) and mass graves (over 100,000,000 killed), the suggestion that Communism is a functioning political and economic model places a heavy burden on the author to demonstrate how it works.  Within the context of the first 2/3s of the book, this is just hand-waved away.  How an intellectually backward political and economic system of governance with a demonstrable history of creating poverty and oppression is able to develop a new technology that is unavailable on Earth stretches the suspension of disbelief well beyond the breaking point.

There is also the sub-text of a limited set of corporations running the world.  Anyone familiar with the 1970s vintage movie "Rollerball" will have already experienced a far more effective treatment of that unlikely outcome.  Within the course of human histories, corporate monopolies rarely last without a government mandate.

This is a decent book if you aren't going to think about the themes and the details too much.  The characters are quite engaging.  The plot involving a non-linear procession of time is intriguing.

But after reading ~2/3s of the book, I knew that it was going well below No Award on my Hugo ballot.  I knew that the author was just splashing militarium (well-crafted militarium, but a splashing of it nonetheless) around without really understanding anything about military training and operations.  And I knew that the political/economic theme was going to be a hot mess.  This was a DNF read for me.

Reading this book put me in the mind of a quote by author Jim Butcher: "Never preach harder than you can entertain."  When the sub-text supersedes the text, an author has shifted from story-telling to preaching.  Butcher's aphorism applies, in varying measures, to all of the works that I put below No Award.

The following are some books from 2019 that I found to be worthy of consideration for the Hugo Award.  Some are works that I originally nominated.  One is a novel published in 2019 that I did not, regrettably, read until 2020.  As always, I encourage my compeer Hugo nominators to engage with a broad spectrum of works published by authors and publishers.

The Sword of Kaigen (Theonite), by M.L. Wang (Amazon.com Services LLC)

This book won the Self Published Fantasy Blog-Off in 2020.  SPFBO doesn't necessarily follow an annual schedule.  It opens for submissions when it opens and the results are available when the reviewers are done.  Fortunately for me, The Sword of Kaigen was published in 2019.  Unfortunately for Ms. Wang, her SPFBO win wasn't until well after the nominations for the 2020 Hugo Awards.  Her book was a delight and clearly worthy of larger consideration within the genre.

Holy Sister, by Mark Lawrence (Harper Voyager)

Pilgrim's Storm Brooding, by Damien Black (Amazon.com Services LLC)
My review

A Little Hatred, by Joe Abercrombie (Orbit)
My review

The Last Dance, by Martin L. Shoemaker (47 North/Amazon Publishing)

As a head start for 2021, permit me to recommend Scarlett Odyssey by C.T. Rwizi; published by 47 North/Amazon.

This is the first book in an epic fantasy series.  The action is set in a world that seems inspired by Africa.  The author was born in Zimbabwe, grew up in Swaziland, and eventually found his way to Dartmouth where he graduated with a BA in government.

The animals in the story seem to be mildly inspired by a fusion of animals traditionally found on the African continent and the mech animals of the video game Ark.  Some of the animals contain stones that can be harvested and used to power machines and talismans.  So there seems to be a steam-punk influence.  And there is magic!

The world-building is completely unique.  The plot doesn't really get started until about a third the way into the book.  Everything up to that is setting up characters and explaining how they operate in the world.  And that first third of the book has been utterly captivating.

This was a free book from Amazon.  They give away a handful of titles each month to Amazon Prime members.  This was the SF/F book for June.  Very entertaining, thus far!