The Forgotten by Bishop O'ConnellMy rating: 3 of 5 stars
3 stars - barely - on my scale, a 3 star book was an OK read, but I'm likely to give it away as I won't want to read it again.
This book violated Dann's Dictum for authors. Simply put, don't write a series unless you can make every installment top notch work. While the first book was great, I had to work to get through this one.
There was far too much magic that was nebulous. The protagonist almost wanders along in a bit of a fog. The use of higher mathematical symbology for the protagonist's means of expressing magic was a little clunky.
Also, my digital copy of the book contained at least a dozen easy to fix grammar and spelling problems. The publisher just didn't put enough effort into making this the best book possible.
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