Friday, August 21, 2020

Review: Air Awakens



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it was ok
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Received as a free book via an Amazon Prime offer.

This is a 2-star review. My experience was closer to 2.5 stars.

The book summary was incredibly deceptive. It presents a young woman who is faced with the choice between her developing magical skills and continuing to work in a library. Instead of a story about magic with some other features tossed in, we end up getting a romance novel that is sprinkled with a bit of magic here and there.

The early bits of the book are terribly dry with drawn-out sections of exposition that lay the groundwork for the magic system. That information does very little to move the narrative along.

The characters are mostly cardboard cut-outs early in the book with some modest development later on.

All of the men in the story are taken with our protagonist. She unknowingly (and accountable  unaccountably) attracts the attention of every eligible bachelor that comes across her path. (a modest exaggeration, but not far off the mark)

At one point, she can only evaluate her own self-worth based on the opinion of one of the princes. Hardly a story of individual worth and empowerment.

There is a trial sequence that is laughable. The "prosecutor" is allowed to voice accusatory flights of fancy that are ephemerally connected to the brief testimony provided by the witnesses.

Our protagonist is presented as possessing the many habits of the elite members of society. In particular, she is presented as being "common", but she speaks like an elite. We get to hear/read a real commoner speak during the trial. The dissonance between the two despite both coming from the same common pool is large.

This is a great book for a pre-teen interested in a "she's so pretty, Cinderella-esque" story. I wouldn't recommend it to anyone else.

Saturday, August 15, 2020

Review: The Rules of Supervillainy

The Rules of Supervillainy (The Supervillainy Saga Book 1)The Rules of Supervillainy by C.T. PhippsMy rating: 3 of 5 stars

The general concept of the book is that supervillains and superheroes exist everywhere. Our protagonist styles himself as a supervillain.....named Mercilous....who purposefully only kills bad people; i.e. other supervillains. Ironic, right?

The book is written as something of a parody and something of an homage to comics/graphic novel based superheroes. It tries to be funny and occasionally succeeds. There are major doses of irony and sarcasm sprinkled throughout.

However, the constant pop-culture references detract from the world-building and the general storyline. Given the number of references to real-world events/people/culture, the lack of any reference to bigger named Marvel/DC Comics names is a bit odd.

It really took until the back half of the book before I was engaged enough to want to finish it. It was a debate until that point as to whether this was going in the DNF pile. The book was competently written with minor proof-reading/editing issues.

Thursday, August 13, 2020

Review: The Girl and the Stars

The Girl and the Stars The Girl and the Stars by Mark Lawrence
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3-star review. My experience was closer to 3.5 stars.

This book is set in Mark Lawrence's "Book of the Ancestor" series. It features a young woman, Yaz, who lives in one of several tribes that wander the nearly ice-covered world of Abeth. There was another people living on Abeth a long, long time ago. Technology allowed them to "improve" themselves and they left Abeth. New people came to Abeth to live among the ruins and build a new civilization. Since their arrival, the star that heated the world slowly died; hence the ice encroaching from the poles towards the equator of the world.

The descendants of that second group now live semi-primitive lives among the technology left behind by the first group of people. That technology seems a bit like "magic" to the remnant that is left in the ruins and/or wandering the ice.

Among the second group of people, there are four sub-groups that occasionally show up that seem to exhibit some sort of enhanced abilities. Yaz is one of those four.

Among the people living on the ice, people exhibiting behaviors from those sub-groups are removed from the general population. Specifically, they are tossed down a deep hole in the ice. Those that survive the drop do....other things.

Yaz is identified as being from the one useful sub-group and is set aside by the "priests". Her brother is identified as being from one of the other three and is dropped through the hole in the ice. Yaz, who loves her brother, dives in after him.

That is the setup and based on my reading of the "Book of the Ancestor" series, this book should be another tremendous adventure.

It fell short for a couple of reasons. The first is that we spend a lot of time in Yaz's head while she feels things. The second reason is that Yaz is inexplicably determined to save everyone. She works to save people that she's known her entire life, those she has barely met, and people that she never really met.

Yaz essentially determined that "it's all so unfair" and proceeds from there. Her interactions with others are limited to either trying to save people or emoting about the need to save people. By the end, her efforts seemed to be more self-serving than self-sacrifice.

The end of the book had some interesting plot twists. If this book connects with another reader early on, then they should stay to the end.

It didn't connect with me and I would have DNF'd this book if I had not read (6) other fantastic books written by Mark Lawrence over the last year. I'm unlikely to read the next book in this series.

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Friday, July 17, 2020

Hugo Voting - 2020

2020 Hugo Awards - Best Novel

That time of the year has come once again.  It is time to vote for the Hugo Awards.  While I usually cover at least three award categories each year, I'm only going to participate in one this year.

Time has been at a premium.  And quite frankly I've experienced most of the fan-casting nominees already.  They aren't that great.  The novels were a mixed bag.  My ranking and a brief version of my reasoning follow.  I've added some other books at the end that would have provided stout competition to those that I placed above No Award.

This year was a pleasant change of pace from recent years.  There was one piece of decent MilSF, there was some horror, there was some grimdark, there was some humor, there was more fun.  Even the book that I didn't finish was pretty good.  If I were reading for pleasure, I would have gladly finished the book regardless of the flaws.  All of the works were quite engaging even if a few of them were not really Hugo Award-worthy material.

I've tried to keep the spoilers down to a minimum, but they do exist.

Middlegame, by Seanan McGuire (Tor.com Publishing)

A set of twins, brother and sister named Roger and Dodger, are bred to achieve ultimate power over reality.  The man, James Reed, that bred them maintains a laboratory of Lovecraftian work where researchers continue lesser experiments.  Reed is himself the product of a dark experiment by another scientist, Asphodel Baker, whose work was rejected by the academy for the crime of it having been created by a woman.  Roger and Dodger were bred to be tools for someone else.  Can they break free of that control and work on their own behalf?

There are lots of delicious layers to this book.  There are some passages dealing with sexism in science.  There are also some themes involving long term planning.  Reed was created by Asphodel to execute her research on the world.  The creation of Reed involves the death of Asphodel.  Before her death, Asphodel seeds the global human consciousness with fictional literature that illustrates the theories of her scientific research.  Which characters are playing the longest game of all?

Themes involving individuals complementing one another are present as well.  Rodger and Dodger have different perspectives on the world; he lives in words while she lives in numbers and equations.  Only together do they possess the potential to control the definitions of reality.

This book is a literary rollercoaster ride.  Lots of ups and downs.  There are many sections where there is a graceful pause just before the bottom drops out and you fall in terror.  It skips back and forth between fantasy and horror with the lightness of a ballerina.

Gideon the Ninth, by Tamsyn Muir (Tor.com Publishing)

Gideon is of the Ninth House.  She feels that the Ninth House has been oppressing her for her entire life.  She is stuck living in a place and among people that reject her on a regular basis.

Harrow is the heir to the Ninth House.  She has the ability to transmute the smallest bit of bone into a full-scale skeleton that will act (and fight) on her behalf.  The Ninth House in general is a goth dream world with skeleton slave workers and everyone mincing about as though they will be in their grave within the next week.  Harrow is called to the Emperor's House to train to become something more.  She needs a knight at her side, and Gideon is all the Ninth has to offer.  So they set off to unravel a series of mysteries and work towards the objective of becoming something more.

This book contains all of the hallmark attributes of good grimdark fiction.  Morally compromised characters that inspire the reader to not really support any of them.  At least not until it becomes clear at the end that there are worse options.  Gideon is also imbued with a tremendous sense of wit.

At the heart of the book are themes of acceptance; acceptance by others and acceptance of oneself.  There are times when the world denies you enough knowledge to be self-aware.  How do your opinions of yourself and the world change once those obstacles fall away?

This was a fun romp with a thoroughly inventive bit of world-building.  Who would have matched bone magic with rocketships and galactic armies?  Every page was a delight.  My biggest complaint is that it is written to be the first book in a series.  The story is not reasonably well contained within this single tome.

Author Peter V. Brett has expressed his desire to write the first book in a series as a well-contained story that will allow the reader to walk away from the series satisfied with that single volume.  His hope is that it will also be good enough to entice the reader back for more.  While this book is a broadly satisfying read, it falls short of that ideal.

A Memory Called Empire, by Arkady Martine (Tor; Tor UK)

A young Mahit Dzmare has been named as Ambassador to the Empire.  Her nation/region uses memory implants to perpetuate communal knowledge and experience.  Ordinarily, after being named Ambassador, she would have been implanted with the memories of the prior Ambassador.

He happens to be dead under troubling circumstances and the oldest copy of his memories is nine years out of date.  The outdated copy that she does receive is flawed in some way.  It eventually stops working altogether.

Mahit ends up searching for answers in a classic whodunnit style.  The answers she finds may determine if the Empire will leave her little nation's region of space alone.  They may also chart the future course of the Empire.

A modest nit to pick is that the Empire provides Mahit with a translator/facilitator that is a citizen of the Empire.   The translator routinely puts Mahit's needs/objectives ahead of where any potential loyalty to the Empire.  There are a couple other characters that are citizens of the Empire and employed by the empire that similarly put Mahit's interests ahead of the Empire.  That arrangement seems unlikely.

I found the book to be generally well written with engaging characters.  While it was not terribly exciting to me, I can see where others might find this work to be an example of superior performance within the genre.

No Award

The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow (Redhook; Orbit UK)

This is the tale of a young January Scaller.  Born into our Earth.  Born into our Universe.  Born into a universe of multi-verses; each accessible through doors that exist at the point where the distance between two universes is narrowed.  People can travel between universes just be walking through a door.

This is the tale of January's father, who traveled through a door as a boy to meet her mother.  This is the tale of January's mother; an adventurist spirit who upon meeting that young boy decides to find her way to him through another such door.  Spoiler - she finds a way through via a different door, and thus we have January.

The premise of the book was so intriguing that I was looking forward to reading it.  I figured there would be lots of doors and lots of worlds to explore.  Nope.  I think you can count the interdimensional doors that characters actually visit within the story on one hand.  You might need one or two other fingers.  There are a few more that are mentioned "off-screen".  Most of the exploration, such as it is, occurs here in our world.

The antagonist of the book leads a small group of explorers who are systematically destroying the doors.  They are also strategically investing in companies that exploit natural resources around the world.  The anti-colonialism message is unmistakable.

The conceit of the book is that the exchange of people from different universes that the doors provide actually fosters human progress.  Therefore the doors should remain open.  The antagonist is shutting them down to shut down progress and consolidate power on this Earth.

There is a strong element of identity politics within the book.  All of the white people, especially the men, are remarkably intolerant and greedy.  All of the non-white people are tolerant and nice.  This arrangement has not yet been seen on our Earth.  I can't speak to other multi-verses.

While I enjoyed this book, it contains a single, fundamental flaw.  The antagonist came through such a door himself.  As he is presented as a source of intolerance and greed, then intolerance and greed must exist in other multi-verses.  If the source of trouble on our Earth came through an interdimensional door, then perhaps it is useful to know who/what is coming through those doors to ensure that the harmful stuff doesn't make it through?

The logical inconsistency creates a plot hole that makes this work one that I would not consider for one of the most significant genre awards.

The City in the Middle of the Night, by Charlie Jane Anders (Tor; Titan)

Sophie and Bianca are college students studying to be something influential in the future.  They live in a city that tightly controls all facets of society.  So they are lucky to have their privileged positions.  Bianca steals some money for food that she doesn't really need.  The police randomly detain them.  Sophie thinks she is saving Bianca by taking the money which the police soon discover.  Sophie is taken outside of the city and forced her to climb a hill (more like a small mountain) into the dark side of the planet.

The planet is tidally locked with the sun!  One side of the planet always faces the sun and the other side exists in perpetual darkness.  The hot side is hot.  The cold side is very cold.

The humans arrived on this planet via a generation ship from Earth.  As the story unfolds, we learn there is a sentient, intelligent species that is native to the planet.  The humans are invaders.

This book continues to cause me so many problems.  Charlie Jane Anders is a wonderfully gifted author.  Charlie's writing is thought-provoking in unusual ways.

This book would have been above No Award if it didn't have so many plot holes.  Where to start.

The planet is tidally locked.  The hot side is hot enough to cause wood to auto-ignite

Humanity is largely concentrated in two cities/regions.  There is a narrow band of the planet that is suitable for human habitation that exists about the terminator between "day" and "night".  Assuming that this planet is reasonably Earth-like (i.e. similar size, mass, etc.) that stationary terminator is bound to be roughly 35 to 40 miles wide.  The moving terminator on Earth is roughly 37 miles wide.

When the police were forcing Sophie over that hill, they were forcing her into an area of eternal and bitterly cold night.  During her venture into this frigid zone, she meets one of the planet's natives and communicates with them.  Eventually, the native gets her back to the city where she slips inside the wall and hides.

She reconnects with Bianca.  Then end up traveling to the other city and learn about a different, far less regimented lifestyle.

The comparison between the two cities reads to me as comparing your average socialist state (complete with currency manipulations and other tricks) and near-total anarchy.  That general theme was handled better in Clockwork Angels by Kevin J. Anderson and Neil Peart several years ago.

Eventually, the two join with some activists in the anarchist city and they go back to the authoritarian city to take over and "change things".  Just what every young college student is determined to do.  Sophie gets separated from the group during the trip home and ends up going to the native city that is under the icy nighttime surface.  She learns about how humans have been unknowingly screwing with the native environment.  She learns a bit more about the humans that first settled on the planet.  The natives end up doing surgery on Sophie to change her into something that is not human and not wholly native.

As a past Hugo winner, Charlie Jane Anders has a record of superior writing performance.  Based on that past work, I felt that I should read this book in full to give it (and Charlie) the fullest opportunity.  The characters were engaging.  There were several themes that were quite thought-provoking.

But there were so many questions.

Why did the humans elect to come to this planet?  They had built a generation ship so they could have elected for another, more hospitable planet.

Within the narrative of the story, different cities...and thus different ethnicities...contribute different parts to the design of the generation ship.  As a result, one group of citizens is able to use their knowledge/resources to gain power over the rest of the ship.  A war breaks out.  While the intergroup dynamics are understandable, the origin for those dynamics, the division of labor/design based on region/ethnicity, doesn't make much sense.

Given the extreme temperature of the side of the planet facing the sun (the autoignition temperature of wood is roughly 700°F), I find it difficult to believe that they had landing craft capable of sustaining life from the generation ship down to the surface of the planet.  That would be comparable to temperatures on either Mercury or Venus.  The extreme temperature differential should cause nearly non-stop storms raging across the terminator zone.

The humans of this world are inhuman.  It is suggested that all of the resources that one could imagine are located on or under the daytime side of the planet.  Yet the humans have done nothing to pursue those resources in an attempt to build a civilization.  They just exist on the scavaged remains of the generation ship until their ability to get back to the generation ship ends.  This inaction by humanity is inhuman.

Anyone with some basic familiarity with thermodynamics will know that having such a high and constant temperature differential creates a source of nearly limitless, cheap power.  Yet the humans do nothing to exploit that potential.  Crops are raised on contraptions that slowly rotate like giant Ferris wheels so that the crops can all get sun and shade.  Humans physically power that motion.

The native city/culture reads like a prototypical utopian socialist state.  While the other city read as the predictable result of a human socialist state, the native city is an echo of the tired cliche that "real socialism hasn't been tried".  People talk.  Things happen.  There are puppet shows in theaters.  Everyone communicates with everyone else.  Things just get done based on quasi-mystical consensus.  Individualism is suppressed. 

There is even some sort of Ancestor ghost-god that everyone consults for guidance.  It is suggested that the ghost-god exists somewhere between a mass illusion, to collective memory, to actual existence.  The only progress that occurs is when a couple of natives isolate themselves from the larger group to develop new devices.  This is the culture that strips Sophie of her humanity so that she can join their collective.

The close of the book is a dream sequence where the altered Sophie takes some sort of astral projection dream trip out into space to recall the time when humans first arrived.  It is stated that this vision doesn't reflect any actual lived experience of the natives.  I found it to be a cheap gimmick.

Throughout the book, there are various suggestions that some of our modern problems are in play.  Greed, sexism, racism, and a host of other intersectional causes appear and then quickly disappear from consideration.  There never is a single flaw nor a single solution beyond the questioning of basic human existence.  This was particularly disappointing as Charlie has done a fantastic job in the past of illustrating multiple flaws/issues in a way that lends clarity to the human condition.

Between the troublesome plot points and the general thematic issues, I simply did not find this to be a compelling work worthy of higher recognition.  This book was the greatest disappointment out of six nominees.  I thought there might be some discussion of challenges associated with space travel, or on developing new worlds, or general engineering obstacles.  All of that ended up being the potted plants in a tableau designed to question the value of human existence.

[A brief coda.  I was so enthused by Charlie's prior Hugo winning book that I was genuinely looking forward to reading this year's nominated work.  This was like having eaten fine food at a Michelin starred restaurant and being served a Big Mac and fries on a subsequent visit.  I originally had this book one slot higher on my ballot until I got done writing this lengthy post.]

The Light Brigade, by Kameron Hurley (Saga; Angry Robot UK)

Dietz is a soldier in a future army.  She enters the service in part to obtain citizenship; with all of the rights that go along with citizenship.  There are three levels of existence; citizenship, legal resident, and just living.  Where you sit in that pecking order determines the resources available to you.

The army she serves is fighting an enemy on Mars.  But it is expensive to move soldiers into space and then to another planet.  It's also hard to launch a surprise attack.

The scientists have discovered a way to convert soldiers into electromagnetic energy (i.e. light) so that the soldiers can be transmitted to the battlefield at the speed of light.  There are a couple of problems with that theory presented in the book.  The first is that being converted from matter to light and back tends to cause a sort of mental psychosis and physical deformities (think of the worst Star Trek transporter accident).  Numerous trips increase the odds of something weird (and probably lethal) happening in transit.  For Dietz, the problem is that she has stopped experiencing linear time.  Her unit launches with a brief for one mission and she ends up on a different one; one she should remember, but doesn't, or one from the future that she also doesn't remember but is definitely out of linear order.

The second problem is that she never seems to land on Mars; the battlefields are always on Earth.  The Martians that she and her unit fight are actually descendants of the humans that emigrated to Mars who have returned to restore the (nuclear?) wasteland of Canada.  They are communists.

On the positive side, the book presents the interpersonal relationships of military service almost perfectly.  Those characters and there relationships with one another were very believable.  Coupled with the mystery of experiencing the non-linear passage of time, this book is a fine read as long as you aren't willing to take any of the rest of it seriously.

The author's lack of familiarity with actual military service is revealed early on.  The characters take part in "marksmanship" training during boot camp that involves using bayonets on dummies.  Marksmanship training involves shooting bullets.  Bayonet training falls under "close combat training".  There is also a boot camp sequence where the recruits go on an extended survival march after only 2 weeks worth of physical training and no survival or combat training.

The author uses the word "corps".  In a military sense, the "s" is silent and describes a defined unit within the military.  The author intends the word to be short for corporations; sounds like "corpse".  That is a confusing use of the term within a MilSF context.

At one point, the author is describing "fire teams" and "squads".  There are references to a commanding officer.  What is never clear is how units break down (i.e. how many fire teams to a squad, squads in a platoon, etc.) nor is it ever clear how many soldiers report to a given CO.  It is inferred that a platoon commander is a commanding officer.  Nope.

One of the soldiers ends up being wounded.  Another soldier opens up their own med-kit and begins rendering aid.  It is the standard doctrine that you always, always, always use the wounded soldier's med-kit before touching your own.

One character, Major General Stakely, is referred to as Major Stakely.  Nope.  That should be either "General Stakely" or "Major General Stakely".  Otherwise, you are demoting the character by four levels.

There are more examples, but the point is made.  The author's familiarity with military structures and traditions is nearly non-existent.

[Please permit a brief pause.  I hate the idea of "sensitivity readers".  I think authors should be free to explore cultures and experiences that may beyond their remit.  I do think that authors should pursue sufficient information to lend accuracy to their work.  "Accuracy readers" are a great idea as they help the author understand where they are bending reality and where they are breaking reality.  Sometimes a purposeful breaking of reality is justified.  This book could have used an accuracy reader so that the author would know what they were breaking.]

This book seems to be an attempt at a conversation with Robert Heinlein and his book Starship Troopers, among others.  It is woefully inadequate for that task.

In Heinlein's books, the people leaving earth are always described as seeking relief from an ever intrusive amount of government.  They always use their newfound freedom to innovate in ways that the legally sclerotic Earth governments always regulated against.  In Heinlein's works, success was always presented as the first fruit of individual liberty.

This has been the story of humanity throughout recorded history.  Heinlein wasn't making something up.  He was echoing human experience.

In contrast, the author has the Communists leaving earth for Mars where they develop the technology needed to restore a North American continent that has been ravaged by war.  I believe nuclear weapons are implied, but the devastation is on that scale nonetheless.

The problem is that human history relative to Communism documents that it causes oppression and poverty.  It slows technological advancements and stifles human knowledge.  That which the party disapproves is simply a topic that will never be explored regardless of the potential benefits.  That which the party approves is enacted regardless of the demonstrable harm.

Any author suggesting that Communism has (finally!) worked is automatically obligated to demonstrate how it worked.  In light of the unbroken series of failures that have led to mass poverty (at the very least) and mass graves (over 100,000,000 killed), the suggestion that Communism is a functioning political and economic model places a heavy burden on the author to demonstrate how it works.  Within the context of the first 2/3s of the book, this is just hand-waved away.  How an intellectually backward political and economic system of governance with a demonstrable history of creating poverty and oppression is able to develop a new technology that is unavailable on Earth stretches the suspension of disbelief well beyond the breaking point.

There is also the sub-text of a limited set of corporations running the world.  Anyone familiar with the 1970s vintage movie "Rollerball" will have already experienced a far more effective treatment of that unlikely outcome.  Within the course of human histories, corporate monopolies rarely last without a government mandate.

This is a decent book if you aren't going to think about the themes and the details too much.  The characters are quite engaging.  The plot involving a non-linear procession of time is intriguing.

But after reading ~2/3s of the book, I knew that it was going well below No Award on my Hugo ballot.  I knew that the author was just splashing militarium (well-crafted militarium, but a splashing of it nonetheless) around without really understanding anything about military training and operations.  And I knew that the political/economic theme was going to be a hot mess.  This was a DNF read for me.

Reading this book put me in the mind of a quote by author Jim Butcher: "Never preach harder than you can entertain."  When the sub-text supersedes the text, an author has shifted from story-telling to preaching.  Butcher's aphorism applies, in varying measures, to all of the works that I put below No Award.

The following are some books from 2019 that I found to be worthy of consideration for the Hugo Award.  Some are works that I originally nominated.  One is a novel published in 2019 that I did not, regrettably, read until 2020.  As always, I encourage my compeer Hugo nominators to engage with a broad spectrum of works published by authors and publishers.

The Sword of Kaigen (Theonite), by M.L. Wang (Amazon.com Services LLC)

This book won the Self Published Fantasy Blog-Off in 2020.  SPFBO doesn't necessarily follow an annual schedule.  It opens for submissions when it opens and the results are available when the reviewers are done.  Fortunately for me, The Sword of Kaigen was published in 2019.  Unfortunately for Ms. Wang, her SPFBO win wasn't until well after the nominations for the 2020 Hugo Awards.  Her book was a delight and clearly worthy of larger consideration within the genre.

Holy Sister, by Mark Lawrence (Harper Voyager)

Pilgrim's Storm Brooding, by Damien Black (Amazon.com Services LLC)
My review

A Little Hatred, by Joe Abercrombie (Orbit)
My review

The Last Dance, by Martin L. Shoemaker (47 North/Amazon Publishing)

As a head start for 2021, permit me to recommend Scarlett Odyssey by C.T. Rwizi; published by 47 North/Amazon.

This is the first book in an epic fantasy series.  The action is set in a world that seems inspired by Africa.  The author was born in Zimbabwe, grew up in Swaziland, and eventually found his way to Dartmouth where he graduated with a BA in government.

The animals in the story seem to be mildly inspired by a fusion of animals traditionally found on the African continent and the mech animals of the video game Ark.  Some of the animals contain stones that can be harvested and used to power machines and talismans.  So there seems to be a steam-punk influence.  And there is magic!

The world-building is completely unique.  The plot doesn't really get started until about a third the way into the book.  Everything up to that is setting up characters and explaining how they operate in the world.  And that first third of the book has been utterly captivating.

This was a free book from Amazon.  They give away a handful of titles each month to Amazon Prime members.  This was the SF/F book for June.  Very entertaining, thus far!

Thursday, July 2, 2020

Heinlein's "Starship Troopers" - The Fascist Question

I wrote the following as part of a conversation regarding Robert Heinlein's "Starship Troopers" on another blog.  The assertion that ST represents a fascist government had been raised.  As is frequently the case, the assertion was made without proof and was seemingly embraced (by some) based on the Paul Verhoeven's movie "Starship Troopers".

As has been widely documented at this point, Verhoeven didn't even read Heinlein's book.  He stopped a few chapters into it.  Essentially, he had a narrative of a fascist state to tell and mapped his story onto some of the general elements of Heinlein's book.

Now I love the book.  It is a Hugo award-winning novel for very good reasons.  Heinlein was in a class of his own and this is some of his best work.

I also love the movie.  But the two are very different works with very different themes that happen to share the same title along with the names of most of the characters.  

It is fair to say that the movie does contain many fascist elements.  The person that wrote the story and directed the film put them there!

It is inaccurate to suggest that the book contains fascist elements.  As a part of that conversation, I turned to the actual text of the book and wrote most of the following.  Afterwards, I did some DuckDuckGo-ing and found a number of other, better prepared, arguments against the idea that the book represents a fascist government in any meaningful way.  So this doesn't necessarily add much in value to the work that has already been done on the subject.  It is, however, mine.  The modestly edited version goes like this....

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I’ve read Starship Troopers at least a dozen times. But my paper copies are gone and this discussion has given me a reason to buy an electronic copy. Here’s an extensive section from Chapter 2 that suggests government service is open to everyone and that while it is regimented, it is not necessarily military in nature.  Johnny, Carl, and Carmen are applying for federal service when they encounter a recruiting officer.  He is explaining the terms of service to them.

It says that everybody, male or female, shall have his born right to pay his service and assume full citizenship—but the facts are that we are getting hard pushed to find things for all the volunteers to do that aren’t just glorified K.P. You can’t all be real military men; we don’t need that many and most of the volunteers aren’t number-one soldier material anyhow. Got any idea what it takes to make a soldier?”

“No,” I admitted.

“Most people think that all it takes is two hands and two feet and a stupid mind. Maybe so, for cannon fodder. Possibly that was all that Julius Caesar required. But a private soldier today is a specialist so highly skilled that he would rate ‘master’ in any other trade; we can’t afford stupid ones. So for those who insist on serving their term—but haven’t got what we want and must have—we’ve had to think up a whole list of dirty, nasty, dangerous jobs that will either run ’em home with their tails between their legs and their terms uncompleted . . . or at the very least make them remember for the rest of their lives that their citizenship is valuable to them because they’ve paid a high price for it. Take that young lady who was here—wants to be a pilot. I hope she makes it; we always need good pilots, not enough of ’em. Maybe she will. But if she misses, she may wind up in Antarctica, her pretty eyes red from never seeing anything but artificial light and her knuckles callused from hard, dirty work.”

I wanted to tell him that the least Carmencita could get was computer programmer for the sky watch; she really was a whiz at math. But he was talking.

“So they put me out here to discourage you boys. Look at this.” He shoved his chair around to make sure that we could see that he was legless. “Let’s assume that you don’t wind up digging tunnels on Luna or playing human guinea pig for new diseases through sheer lack of talent; suppose we do make a fighting man out of you. Take a look at me—this is what you may buy . . . if you don’t buy the whole farm and cause your folks to receive a ‘deeply regret’ telegram. Which is more likely, because these days, in training or in combat, there aren’t many wounded. If you buy at all, they likely throw in a coffin—I’m the rare exception; I was lucky . . . though maybe you wouldn’t call it luck.”

He paused, then added, “So why don’t you boys go home, go to college, and then go be chemists or insurance brokers or whatever? A term of service isn’t a kiddie camp; it’s either real military service, rough and dangerous even in peacetime . . . or a most unreasonable facsimile thereof. Not a vacation. Not a romantic adventure. Well?”

Carl said, “I’m here to join up.”

“Me, too.”

“You realize that you aren’t allowed to pick your service?”

Carl said, “I thought we could state our preferences?”

“Certainly. And that’s the last choice you’ll make until the end of your term. The placement officer pays attention to your choice, too. First thing he does is to check whether there’s any demand for left-handed glass blowers this week—that being what you think would make you happy. Having reluctantly conceded that there is a need for your choice—probably at the bottom of the Pacific—he then tests you for innate ability and preparation. About once in twenty times he is forced to admit that everything matches and you get the job . . . until some practical joker gives you dispatch orders to do something very different. But the other nineteen times he turns you down and decides that you are just what they have been needing to field-test survival equipment on Titan.” He added meditatively, “It’s chilly on Titan. And it’s amazing how often experimental equipment fails to work. Have to have real field tests, though—laboratories just never get all the answers.”

There is a later section where the doctor administering a physical indicates that the only disqualifying factor is if a person cannot understand the oath of enlistment. Even a person confined to a wheelchair and blind in both eyes could enlist for a term and become a voting citizen.

This reads to me as there being non-military government organizations that require work and personal risk and thus are qualifying as a voting citizen. Sort of like the CCC that began back in the 1930s.

During the early boot camp passages, the book mentions that older men had enlisted and were having trouble keeping up with the physical training. They retained the option to shift over to a different form of federal service. During the later passages where Rico is in OCS, the Commandant mentions that most voting citizens are not military veterans. He points out that anyone serving on active duty is ineligible to vote. And there is a discussion about various filters that every civilization has used to restrict the franchise; age, gender, property ownership, etc.

I have never understood the case for asserting that ST contains any noteworthy fascist elements. Having a strong military is not fascist; although fascist states almost uniformly do have strong militaries.

Restricting the franchise isn’t inherently fascist, although fascist states invariably use franchise restrictions to stay in power. One has to be 18 to vote in the US. I’ve met brilliant 15-year-olds and 40-year-olds that…ummm….are a long, long way from brilliant. I’ve met renters that could name all of the Supreme Court justices (as one measure of political acumen/engagement) and property owners that can’t name a single one of their elected representatives.

The “unique poll tax”, as the Commandant terms it, of ST is not inherently fascist either.

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Getting the quoted text into this piece required jumping through a couple of different devices.  I may try to add the other sections from boot camp and the OCS H&MP class at a later time.

I remain unconvinced of the assertion that the book is inherently fascist.  It goes out of the way to point out that everyone has rights that are respected and that formal military service is not a requirement for being eligible to vote.

I would be interested in any informed opinions to the contrary.

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A modest coda.  I was treated to John Scalzi's media critic review of the movie Starship Troopers courtesy of a post over at File 770.  While his comments were directed towards Robert Heinlein in general rather than about Heinlein's Starship Troopers book, I think they are a worthy reference point.

It's in line with Verhoeven's other glimpses of the future; you could plot a direct line between the fascistic corporations of Robocop and Total Recall to the planetary government in Troopers -- and no doubt some desperate film student will, one day, for a thesis. But it's likely to annoy true Heinlein fans. Heinlein was occasionally confused with being a fascist, just like Ayn Rand, a writer who Heinlein, for better or worse, shares most of his reading audience with. He wasn't (neither was she, for that matter, though sometimes you have to wonder) but this film isn't going to help his reputation much on that score. 
It's not quite the same thing as the Dalai Lama ensuring that I'll get total consciousness on my death bed, but it ain't bad.

Tuesday, June 23, 2020

Time In Service

I have questions.  And so I seek answers.

During the Sad Puppies imbroglio of a few years ago, one accusation being tossed around is that new and inexperienced authors were being preferenced over older authors.  The suggestion was that the new hotness was pushing the old and busted to the curb.

I thought it was an interesting proposition.  The data doesn't seem to support it very well according to one measure.

The data languished on my hard drive for a couple of years until recently when Camestros Felaptron expressed the position that authors generally have a limited career span in which to attract the attention of groups giving out awards for writing excellence.

As I had the data through 2016, I tacked on the data through 2019 and did a little tweaking to the chart format.  And here we go.

The winning author for the "best novel" category is listed in order of the year of their win.  Mark Clifton and Frank Riley split the award as co-authors in 1955.  I used the Internet Speculative Fiction Database to determine the first year that each author published a novel as well as the first year that each author published a sub-novel length work.  

I checked all of those years from 1953 through 2016 in 2016.  I checked the winners from 2017 to 2019 today.  I suppose that something might have changed for the pre-2017 winners in the last three years.

The raw values for both series (novel to win and short story to win) are shown using the solid lines.  I created running averages on a 5 year and 10 year basis that are shown as dashed lines.

Anyone interested in the raw data is welcome to take a peek.

Here's the chart.

Hugo Best Novel Winners - Experience [click to embiggen]

So what does the data suggest?  For most of the history of the Hugo awards, the winner of the Best Novel category had to wait, on average, about 11.6 years on average after their first novel was published before winning their first Hugo Best Novel award.  Likewise, the authors had to wait an average of 18.2 years after publishing their first sub-novel length work before getting the Best Novel award.  

Those values have floated around a bit.  There was a period during the 1980s where nominators seemed to focus on significantly less experienced authors.  And the last 6-8 years have tended towards slightly less experienced authors.

The data doesn't support or undermine Camestros' assertion.  But it was that article that prompted me to update the data and finally push it out the door rhetorical and proverbial.

Friday, May 15, 2020

What Bill Gates Does With His Billions

It should be common knowledge at this point that Bill Gates is using his retirement years to improve living conditions for some of the most impoverished people on the planet.  The foundation that he and his wife, Melinda, operate looks to make a difference in the world on a variety of fronts.

One of those areas is in spreading of vaccines so that people will not catch some of the more commonly preventable diseases.  As a result, Bill Gates has known for years that the random mutation of a nasty bug could significantly impact humanity.  He has been campaigning for awareness and preparedness for years if not decades.

How much does he spend on otherwise underfunded viruses?  A lot.

A recent Wall Street Journal article included a graphic showing the leading sources of spending for neglected infectious diseases.  You will need to scroll about 2/3s the way down to see the bar chart.  It looked to me like his foundation was about fourth in terms of the amount of money spent.

The data came from the Policy Cures Research organization out of Australia.  I thought the bar chart was interesting, but I wanted to see the data.  A short bit of DuckDuckGo-ing later and I was on the Policy Cures Research website and had found this executive summary of their report on research for neglected diseases.  Effectively diseases that are treatable, but for which such treatments are not currently well funded.

The following image came from that report.  These are the top twelve sources of funding for R&D dealing with neglected diseases.  Those twelve sources provide 90% of the funding for neglected diseases.

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Take a close look.  Of the top twelve sources, three come from the US government; US NIH at #1, USAID at #7, and the US DOD at #8.  Taken together, the United States provides roughly 43% of the funding for research on these diseases (1.589 Billion US$)

Second place is funding provided by the health care industry.  Private companies donating their research money are the second-largest source of funding into preventing these neglected diseases.  That money comes out of their profits. (694 Million US$)

The thing about those profits is that health care providers to generate them to any significant amount where countries have nationalized health care systems.  Those systems cap payments to providers at slightly above the cost of production.  That cost of production does not include the cost of research and development.

Healthcare profits are disproportionately derived from sales in the United States.  When it comes to funding healthcare R&D, it is the US healthcare consumer (or their insurance company) that is the largest source of funding. 

The healthcare industry would not have enough money to be the second leading provider of research funding in the area of neglected diseases were it not for our comparatively free market and the profits that it generates.

The third leading source of funding for neglected diseases is the Gates Foundation.    In fact, the Gates Foundation donates more money than almost all of the non-US based sources in the rest of the top 12.  (585 Million US$)

Now the population of Europe is over 2.5 times that of the United States.  Yet while the US provides 43% of the funding for neglected disease R&D, the EC provides only 3.3% of the funding.  They can't even be bothered to beat the Gates Foundation that provides 14% of such funding.

Quite frankly, Europeans are not paying their fair share when it comes to funding any healthcare-related research and development.  But it is shocking to see exactly how little they care for the rest of humanity. 

When the private efforts of the healthcare industry and those of a single individual dwarf the contributions of an entire continent, the only reasonable conclusion is that the people of that continent greedily place their own position above that of the rest of humanity.  The people that are most at risk from these neglected diseases are living in poverty in third world nations.

When people like me point out that Europeans are not paying their fair share (healthcare research, their defense, etc.), situations like this one are what informs that opinion.

I'm glad that Bill Gates and his wife are investing their immense wealth in improving the world.  If we left it to the "democratic socialist" nations of Europe, such work would never be funded.

Saturday, May 2, 2020

Loving Data In The Time Of Covid

I've been having discussions in various social media about the impact of the Covid-19 virus on the US.  My interlocutors have been pointing out that the total number of Covid-19 deaths in the United States as indicative of gross incompetence by the Trump administration.  My response was to suggest that the US has (thus far) done about as well as Europe.  That conclusion was based on some rough calculations...

...that were wrong!  Specifically, I had used a population for Europe that was grossly below the actual population count.  I looked at the European population on several sites and came up with different answers as it all depends on what one counts as being "Europe".  Sometimes Russia is included.  Sometimes it isn't.  Sometimes only part of Russia is included.

Regardless of how one defines the population of Europe, my estimate was way low.  This was a significant deficiency in my response.

So I set out to correct that deficiency.  The Covid data that follows came from https://ncov2019.live/data/europe and the NYC health department.   The population data came from Wikipedia entries for each nation in the database presented by ncov2019.live.  All data was as of 5/1/2020.

To restate, I was of the opinion that simply looking at the gross number of deaths in the US was an inadequate measure of the administration's response to the Covid pandemic.  A better way of judging the government's response is to compare our experience with that of other, comparable nations.

And the only way to make that comparison is to look at those deaths as a percentage of the population.  We have had over 60,000 deaths while Belgium has had over 7,700 deaths.  Simply looking at those raw numbers would suggest that the US government is failing badly.

Yet the deaths in Belgium have been 0.0669% of their total population while in the US, the deaths have only been 0.0196% of our population.  Covid deaths in Belgium are three times as high as that of the US when measured as a percentage of the population.

The ncov2019.live dataset indicates 50 nations as being in Europe.  I omitted the Vatican City data as they have less than 1000 citizens and they have managed to have a negative death to do Covid.  Being the Vatican, I'm assuming that Lazarus is involved in some way.  Omitting 1000 citizens out of a population of over 832 million isn't liable to alter the statistical result.

I added the US data as that is the comparison that I'm trying to make.  I also added New York City as a separate entity and added a line for US data with the NYC data removed.  While New York City is definitely part of America, they are also having a pretty unique experience with the Covid virus.  I also added a line for all of Europe.

Here's the data for Europe and the US.  Note that there are several modern nations in Europe that have had a much higher death rate than what has occurred in the United States.  Also note that when the data from NYC is removed, the average experience of the rest of the United States is almost identical to that of all of Europe.

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While this isn't evidence of stellar performance by the administration, it also isn't exactly proof of malfeasance.

Another way of looking at the data is with respect to the confirmed cases.  The number of confirmed cases is a bit fraught as we have been behind the curve on mass testing.  Here is the data.


New York City isn't the only outlier in the dataset.  Russia is another one.  They have only recently acknowledged that they have failed to halt the spread of Covid in their country.  So the data from Russia is likely to change pretty dramatically over the next couple of weeks.  As a result, I then added a line for Europe with the data from Russia removed.

Note that while the US without NYC is about the same as all of Europe, including Russia, Europe without Russia is worse than all of the US, including NYC.



One of the people with whom I was conversing suggested that the ratio between the percentage of confirmed cases to the percentage of deceased cases indicates something ominous about the lack of testing.  Essentially, the lower that ratio, the fewer people have been tested, and thus the great the odds for future deaths.

If the ratio of the percentage of confirmed cases to the percentage of deceased is meaningful in any way, then Europe is doing half as well as the United States.


There were a couple of good conclusions to be drawn from the data.

The first one is to be more careful with the data.  My estimate of the population of Europe was pretty low.  I was not including Russia in my estimate.  Nor was I counting nations such as Kazakhstan or a host of other former Soviet satellite states.  That was an obvious error on my part.

The second conclusion is that despite the error in my estimates of the European population, my impression that the impact of Covid-19 on the United States has been on par with the impact on Europe is largely correct based on the data that is available today.

While there are several points in our response to Covid where the administration has clearly fallen short, the net result is not significantly different from other, comparable nations.  Suggestions that the administration's performance is defined by gross incompetence and/or malfeasance are not justified by the data.

My perspective remains unchanged.  The US is a big country.  We should expect a large number of infections & deaths.  The US Covid experience is reasonably comparable with Europe when viewed on a percentage basis.

People that focus solely on the total number of cases and/or deaths while ignoring the relative size of our population are not seeking to educate and inform.  They are looking to wave "the bloody shirt" and whip up people's passions.

Passionate and uneducated people rarely make wise decisions.


Friday, April 17, 2020

Re-Visiting Those Damned Cold Equations

Fans of science fiction will generally be aware of the short story "The Cold Equations" written by Tom Godwin and first published in Astounding Magazine in 1954.  A super short summary of the plot is that a young girl has stowed away on an emergency rocket that is being sent to a planet with a serum needed to save the people on the planet.  The rocket is designed to make the trip with only the pilot aboard...barely.  The additional weight of the stowaway is sufficient to cause the rocket to miss its destination.  The story frames the choice as between killing the girl so that the rocket can reach its destination, or letting the people on the planet die of some lethal illness.

The story was first published in the 1950s when science fiction frequently framed issues as binary choices.  While stories from that period might feature a clever protagonist to discover a third path, it was just as likely that poor choices would result in predictable disaster.  The best criticism that I have read is that the rocket did not have a large enough safety factor.

There is a forthcoming anthology of rebuttals to The Cold Equations.  I expect many essayists to add elements that are not present in the original story to reach their own preferred conclusions.  Rather than address the story as written, they will probably add in a factor that is not otherwise evident as a lever to be used against the main purpose of the story.

Rather than discussing the merits and criticism of the story, I'm first going to travel to Texas, rhetorically.

Lt. Governor Dan Patrick implied that he was willing to die to ensure the survival of his children and grandchildren.  He went on to suggest that lots of grandparents would make the same choice.  The context of his comments was the "choice" between maintaining our self-quarantine that is significantly damaging our economy or resuming normal social habits at the demonstrable risk of killing off a substantial number of our elderly.
"No one reached out to me and said, as a senior citizen, are you willing to take a chance on your survival in exchange for keeping the America that all Americans love for your children and grandchildren?" Patrick, 70, told host Tucker Carlson. "And if that's the exchange, I'm all in."
Dan Patrick is a former radio talk show host.  Like other media personalities that have been elected to public office, Mr. Patrick needs to recall that people in his current position need to exhibit a bit more discretion when they speak.

That's the polite version of "Dan Patrick decided to be an idiot for a few minutes".

We are not currently at the point where we need to be deciding who lives and who dies.  We are most certainly not at the point where we need to risk the lives of senior citizens by prematurely restarting the economy.

That being said, we do have to make choices; sometimes hard choices.  The decision to build an interstate highway can spell success or destruction for a small town.  The decision to raise or lower taxes can result in a change in mortality and life expectancy that is measured in real lives but experienced so diffusely that you can never truly identify a single life specifically cut short as a result.  The decision to regulate how medicine is practiced and funded might save tens of thousands of lives in the next year, but cost tens millions of more lives in the coming centuries by altering how new medicines and procedures are developed and deployed.

We are currently rushing to produce more ventilators.  Manufacturers are repurposing their facilities to meet the current demand.  The race pits innovation and ingenuity against literal death.  Innovation and ingenuity might well lose the race in a big way.  Unlike literature, there is no deus ex machina to save the day.

The fact is that we all have to make choices based on what we hope is the best of information.  We are all learning now about the importance of certain types of medical and personal protective equipment.  We are learning that we had manufacturing and import capacity to cover the usual needs of society, but not enough to cover our needs during a pandemic.  We are learning that we had stockpiles sufficient to cover a few significant regional calamities, but such stockpiles were entirely insufficient for a larger catastrophe.

What comes next?  Will we have a nationally organized database of manufacturers that are pre-qualified/pre-positioned to shift manufacturing for these critical items?  Will the design of those critical items be periodically updated? 

And of course, there will be new calls for a nationalized health care system in the US.  The most common indictment of the US system is that it rations care based on income.  Will those critics evaluate the other methods of health care rationing used in nationalized health care systems?  In the US, almost all get some level of health care and some get more than others.  In most nationalized systems, all get some level of health care and sometimes all get none when it comes to modern treatments.  Will we have a full and rational discussion or will there be more of the usual propaganda?

Will the critics of The Cold Equations pause in their rush to suggest alternative conclusions to acknowledge the practical limitations, however ham-handedly presented, that were in play?

The utility of science fiction is that it allows us to take an issue out of the pressing moment and twist it and test it and look at it in a different way.  Are the principles in play appropriate?  Is the design sufficient to the task at hand or is the safety margin to low to ensure success?  Do we sometimes have to make do with what is available now rather than wishing for a perfect solution to arrive too late to be of any value?

Science fiction allows us to ask the hard questions, to examine the cold equations, so that we can craft a rational response to real problems.  The other option is to emotionally demand that we unquestionably cherish the old and infirm as if we possessed unlimited resources.

Loving a senior in the age of Covid-19 certainly means doing our level best to prevent them from being infected and that, once infected, they get the very best of care that is available.  In the age of Covid-19, there may not be care available.  The doctors and nurses may have to choose between using a ventilator for a senior or using for someone in their 20s.  How does an emotional plea to cherish the elderly help resolve that choice?  The same doctors and nurses may have to choose between using chloroquine (or a similar drug) for a senior or reserving it for a person using it to address a long term autoimmune problem.  How does an emotional plea to cherish the elderly inform help to resolve that choice?

The single greatest flaw in The Cold Equations is that it does not explore any alternative solutions.  It does not examine why the safety margins had to be so slim that the mass of a single stowaway was sufficient to lethally undermine the purpose of the rocket.  Tom Godwin simply establishes a binary choice that is to be made and then allows time to elapse.  The Cold Equations presents the emotional mirror of cherishing those at the greatest risk from Covid-19 without examining the reality of the limited resources that are available in that moment.

What The Cold Equations does do quite effectively is cause the reader to confront that situation where the fuel cell is empty.  Where the tank of air has been depleted.  Where the last morsel of food has been divided and consumed.

We are ill-served by those that pretend that hard choices do not exist.

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There are other works that deal more effectively with issues surrounding questions of survival and the utilization of available resources.

Lucifer's Hammer by Larry Niven

An asteroid crashes into earth causing massive tidal waves, earthquakes and throws the earth's climate into a far cooler range of temperatures.  Modern technology is...largely....gone.

The White Plague by Frank Herbert

After an Irish terrorist kills a scientist's wife, the scientist cooks up a bug designed to kill all human women.  He lets it loose on the island of Ireland after notifying the world of the need to quarantine the island.  The world does not listen.  Things go...poorly.

The women that survive find themselves with a tremendous amount of power and influence due to their unique...ummm...resources.

Seveneves by Neal Stephenson

Another "large body crashes into the Earth" story.  This time it is the moon or at least pieces of it.  The race is on to get humanity off of the Earth in a way that allows them to survive and perhaps thrive. 

The Last Dance (The Near-Earth Mysteries, #1) by Martin L. Shoemaker

The Earth isn't under attack.  But in this story, humans explore the deadly reaches of our solar system; pretty much anywhere that isn't firmly on terra firma.  The main protagonist is a spaceship captain who built his career on identifying and minimizing risks.  His planning and engineering necessarily mean making tradeoffs and planning for tragedy.  He imparts that sensibility on his crew at every turn.  There is also a whodunnit mystery and a lot of astrophysics involved.  This was one of my best novel nominees for the Hugo Awards for 2020.

Sunday, April 12, 2020

Review: The Wolf

The Wolf The Wolf by Leo Carew
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

This is a 4-star review. That is a barely accurate estimate of my experience.

The people from the south invade the people in the northlands. The people from the south are a prototypical pre-industrial western civilization bent on conquest. The people from the north are supposedly "barbarians" who train for battle, are somewhat larger in stature, and who live in concert with nature; think North American First Peoples but with buildings. They have no written record; everything is recalled by memory with people specifically being tasked with that purpose.

The wily northerners eventually win the day and toss the southerners back across the river to their well-ordered cities and farms.

This was an interesting book full of a broad range of interesting characters. The world-building was good but not great. The northerners had to devote a ton of manpower into maintaining a record of their history. Historians are charged with remembering small bits of history. The number of fighters seems outsize compared with the number of tradespeople needed to support a civilization. There are just too many elements that don't fit together.

Added to those features is the presentation of the northerners as being a moral and just people because they "live with nature".

A final criticism is that this is obviously the first book in a series. The story is intended to extend into multiple volumes and what you get in Book 1 is really just the first chapter of the larger story.

From my perspective, a reader should be able to walk away from book 1 and feel like they have had a complete experience. If it was good enough, then book 2 will get read. But there should be enough closure that a reader can walk away after book 1 and not feel like anything was missing.

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Review: Kings of Paradise

Kings of Paradise Kings of Paradise by Richard Nell
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Rated at 4 stars.  A 3.5-star rating is closer to my experience.  Detailed characters.  Check.  Broad world-building.  Check.  Interesting premise.  Check.

I still spent the last third of this book debating my rating and whether or not I would finish it.  By that point, this had become just another first book in a fantasy series.  It was good enough that I pushed through to the finish.

Magic is intimated in the first half of the book, but it doesn't really exist until the last half of the book.  And then it is just one character.  There is a matriarchal society which is a nice change of pace, but the justifications for it run a little thin by the end of the book.

We jump around between characters quite a bit.  We also jump through time quite a bit.  The combination is a bit more complicated than I wanted in a reading experience.

My recommendation is that you try the free section of the ebook first to see if it connects with you.  Otherwise, move on to something else.

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Review: Neon Leviathan

Neon Leviathan Neon Leviathan by T.R. Napper
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

This is a 5-star review only because a 6-star review isn't possible. Read this collection. It is fantastic.

The author takes on the future from an Asian/Australian perspective. China has risen and is slowly eating up the region. Social ratings are in play as are bio-warfare and computer warfare.

One of the stories is the novella-length "The Weight of the Air, The Weight of the World" that echoes George Orwell and Philip K Dick.  The story eventually revolves around the nature of memory when the government has the ability to change it, and how such a power might be abused.
 This novella is on my Hugo nomination shortlist for 2021.

The author takes on class issues, race, immigration, and concepts around individual liberty. The perspectives run a broad range as do the narratives. One story involves the difficulties around separating virtual reality from actual reality; lethal consequences ensue when one is mistaken for the other.

This collection is a tour-de-force for any sci-fi fan.

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Monday, March 30, 2020

A Quilt for Aedan

I'm still getting caught up on photos of my various quilting projects.  It turns out that I've had to ask for photos from various recipients because I forgot to take/keep photos on my own.

It looks like 2016 was in the middle of my time off from quilting.  The only quilt that I could find from 2016 was for young Aedan.  Here he is a few years on with his brother Liam holding up the quilt for all to see.



And here is his brother, Liam, way back in the day claiming the quilt as a matter of older brother's privilege.  I'm given to understand that such a maneuver is a bit harder to complete these days.

Monday, March 2, 2020

Review: Snowbound

Snowbound Snowbound by Blake Crouch
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

This is a 2-star review. At best it is a 1.5 star book.

The premise is straightforward. A wife/mother is abducted. The police fail to execute a proper investigation. A shadowy law enforcement figure shows up claiming to have "the facts".

The reality is that the young womany was taken for her looks to serve as a sex slave at a posh Alaskan wilderness retreat. Rich men pay lots of money to visit and rape the women. A rescue ensues.

The plot is riddled with more holes than a wheel of Swiss cheese. The Alaskan resort is massive, remote, and unknown. It is highly unlikely that such a structure would ever be built/exist undetected.

The resort is visited by lots of men and there are many men involved in the abduction and maintenance of the slaves/women. There is zero possibility that such a secret operation could remain a secret for long given the number of people involved.

Then there is the cardboard characterizations. The more prominent patrons are all Texas oilmen or their close friends.

The first half/two-thirds of the story is a pretty good investigation/pursuit story. It's only when the location of the story shifts to Alaska where flimsy storytelling rears its ugly head.

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Wednesday, February 26, 2020

Review: Rocks Fall. Everyone Dies.

Rocks Fall. Everyone Dies. Rocks Fall. Everyone Dies. by Eddie Skelson
My rating: 1 of 5 stars

This is a 1-star review. That is more stars than it is worth.

The author is in dire need of a copyeditor and needs to retake 8th grade English/grammar.

I read less than a dozen pages before I was consumed with the urge to hurl this book across the room, Dorothy Parker style. Sadly, it was an electronic copy.

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Tuesday, February 25, 2020

Review: Eve of Darkness

Eve of Darkness Eve of Darkness by S.J. Day
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

This is a 3-star review. That is a reasonable estimate of my experience with this book.

The conceit of the book is that God and angels exist. The Bible is presented as being a not-quite accurate portrayal of their history. Eve is a successful young woman who is in lust with Cain; The Cain - the brother killing guy that now is unable to die.

Eve is given the "Mark of Cain" by his brother, Abel. Nope....he isn't dead. He is a part of a sort of celestial bail bond organization that collects and kills demons and other evil creatures who have tried God's patience a bit too much.

This book is about Eve's transition from ordinary mortal to being a "Mark" working for the same bail bond organization. The general world-building was good, but not great. The characters were reasonably engaging. However, there were a few features that undermined the general narrative.

- The "Marks" are supposed to be sinners that are working off their sin so they can get into heaven. There isn't any explanation as to why individuals are selected to become Marks. One Mark is indicated to be a past member of a yakuza in Japan; so a gang banger of some sort. But there isn't any indication of what made Eve a uniquely suitable subject to be "recruited". We have no real definition of her sins that brought her to the attention of the divine.

- The attraction between Cain and Eve has no basis beyond "just because". The same is true for Abel's attraction to Eve. The entire basis for relationships in the story appears to be nothing more than overactive hormones. It is pointed out that Cain had been married before, but Eve is referred to as his "first love". The author is just pushing people together and expecting the reader to ignore the paper-thin justification for these relationships.

- Sex. Lots of steamy and explicit sex. While that seems to be a feature in a segment of the urban fantasy genre, it doesn't do much to advance the narrative of this story.

- Speaking of which, the first act of sex is when Abel rapes Eve. In later chapters of the book, she remains attracted to him despite resisting his advances.

I will probably add a couple more things on my blog as there are cultural issues that don't really belong in a formal review of a book.

If you want a light read that is heavy on the erotica and light on the plot, this is a good book for you.

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And here are the "couple more things".  Mostly this has to do with politics and culture with respect to some aspects of SF/F fandom.

This book leans heavily on the "female gaze".  The "male gaze" is a reference to when male characters notice the physical attributes....primarily breasts and posteriors...of female characters.  This book leans heavily on the reverse of that phenomenon.  The male characters are heavily objectified.

And I'm largely OK with that.

The problem is that if this were a male author engaged in writing a story that leans heavily on male characters objectifying female characters, then that author would be savaged as being a misogynist hack.  Much worse invective would be headed his way.

This book was published by Tor.  They appear to be currently engaged in correcting the disparity in diversity within SF/F works.  I note that they heavily promote female authors.  At least, that is what shows up in my email box and in various social media experiences.

And I'm largely OK with that as well.

Again, the problem is that I can't imagine Tor publishing a male author's story that heavily trafficked in the proverbial male gaze.  Nor can I imagine Tor publishing a male author's story that features a prominent and obvious rape that not only had zero consequences for the rapist but had his victim still expressing some form of attraction to her rapist.

This is sort of sloppy storytelling is not what I would expect from one of the "big five" publishers.  I think that this situation exists because of a desire to correct...in this case, one might say over-correct...for past issues with diversity, or lack thereof.

Our culture may made moderate a bit in the next decade.  The pendulum may swing back towards the middle.  Common sense might come back in vogue.  I might read this book with different eyes while living in that future culture.  In our current culture, it is difficult to ignore these issues relative to this book.

Lightly edited on 3/24/2021